Beanworld! Fine choice. You have an interesting list yourself, amigo. And you put a hell of a lot of thought into your profile. Need to reread it, but first I want to check out your other writing.
Thanks for the words of welcome. I’m deeply interested in evolutionary concepts and I love how Dawkins brings it all to life. Looking at your extensive music list, thought you mind not mind a shameless plug: check out “Michou” at itsnicetomichou.com An up and comer…
Thanks for commenting on my itty, bitty Tanka. Everything is new for me here but I can’t wait to sample all the tasty morsels. Like you, I love poetry.
Hi Darryl, and thanks for such a great welcome message. :) I did take Automated Alice out from the library once, but I haven’t got around to reading it yet; it’s still on my vast to-be-read list. Yeah, Vurt has an amazing energy; and I agree with you about Book 7 of Harry Potter. I’ll definitely keep your recommendation in mind, and add you so I can come back and read some of your poetry. Thanks again!
Thank you Darryl. I wrote For Those Who Ask Why 2 months ago when I actually did it, and am grateful for your support, which also works on many levels.
Thanks Darryl, for Girls with Guns. I was suprised to get your note since you are so much a denizen of the kinder, gentler world. Good to hear from you. Cheers.
A brief glance at the depth of quotes, stories, and insights shared on your homepage leaves me agog. I have been a member in solitude for too long and have committed myself to more active partipation.
Thank you for jogging loose my epiphany. Indeed, I must step up my game.
Thank you for reading and commenting on The People I Thought I Knew. Thank you for the suggestions. What part of the story did you see everything coming? Maybe I should change the title, too.
Thanks, Darryl for your well wishes and for stopping by my scarcely used profile. I’m just getting started on Fictionaut, but the experience has been fun so far.
Thanks Darryl for reading my story ‘Pale Heart’. It means a lot to a Hong Kong writer in English (it’s a rarity) like me. Looking forward to reading your work here.
Darryl, Thanks for the warm welcome to Fictionaut. Your bio is so detailed, I don’t when I will get to your contributions! So looking forward to reading your work. If there’s anything you like of my writing, do spread the word. It’s tough to be the new kid on the block. Best, ~ J
I totally agree about Melanie Rae Thon—thank you for the comment—and would add that Sweet Hearts is brilliant!!! I reviewed it on Amazon: take a look. So glad to be here with you and the other good folks here!
Thanks Darryl, for replying on my thread. I loved what you wrote. You me, and everyone who has made a comment on, Should Our Writing Be Censored, seem to agree that on the whole it should not.
Thanks, Darryl, for taking the time to read a long story, Dream. I’m looking forward to reading more of your work, also. And I’m younger than that now, too.
Darryl, thanks so much for commenting on Elephant. Glad this struck a chord, and the poem you wrote in response is just wonderful. Thank you for that especially!
Thank you for commenting on Nothing to Do. Based on what others have said, I’m thinking about cutting the last stanza and maybe using it for another poem.
DP, just wanted to thank you again for your sweet message on Floating Islands. I am so enamored with (by?) that Duras book The Lover. It was impactful on my writing, and somehow made a place in my brain… thus the poem
Thanks Darryl for the welcome. I spent a whole summer in high school reading Doyle. I hope that my story ‘London Fog’ can be a fraction has good as what others have published on this website.
Darryl,
Thank you again for the read and your wonderful comments. I also have up Things I Should Have Done - #1, and Things I Should Have Done #2. If you have a chance, I’d love your thoughts.
Darryl - cucucajoob for Poor Man. Tried to show the wonder and glee of a kid that age on the adventure of his life. Think I succeeded best in the passage you cited.
Just wanted to say that with “Undertakers of the Dead,” you’ve described (so beautifully) just what it’s like to try and put world and self into beautiful words, only to feel like the attempt upends itself - first because the world is not so precise as a poem in the making (and yet only a poem can really describe it!) and second because we look around at our bookshelf and suspect that others have already done it, and better. You’ve captured the writer’s, or specifically the poet’s, experience in so many great lines. Three of my favorites: - “I have to swallow those … perfected words of the other alive poets” - “just about anything you see will do, just buffeted back and forth” - the kid putting together the toy train track “found in a crummy basement somewhere labelled ‘missing some parts’” Still, even though the piece speaks to the poet’s experience, it speaks to the world and whoever wants to listen. It speaks not just to the poet’s experience, but (somehow - can’t quite set it d
As I said to Walter and Sam, it’s one of my darker time poems. Don’t go there too often.
So many suicides here in Australia, especially teenagers. I’ts so sad, all that lost potential. Appreciate your comments very much, Darryl.
Thanks for commenting on Pleiku Jacket, Darryl. I do love working with the mundane and the horrific and am glad you found that the mixture worked in this piece.
Hi Darryl, thanks for the warm welcome! Still finding my way around here, so I’ll be back when I’ve got my bearings. Just posted my first piece on Fictionaut, ‘Letter to Neruda’. Cheers!
Thanks for the nice comment—I love it that croci is a word (verified by Wikipedia!)—and not octupi. Your remark was a friendly welcome to Fictionaut, which I am still learning to navigate (just figured out how to get to my “wall” without following the link in my email).
Darryl Price, thank you for the welcome. I look forward to reading your works. Hopefully their as interseting as your photograph is, but I imagine them to be so.
Darryl - thanks for gander and words on Poetipedia, I think it subscribes to your personal philosophy. Great profile, an architecture in itself. Treatise on Beatles is bloody balmy, although loved by many knee-high to a walrus, us walruses know what you’re sayin. Stay diverse! I’ll check out yours.
Thanks for the comment — I agree, many have preconceived notions about Charles and don’t take him seriously. He had such a way with language though … a way of getting to the “core” of things. Here is a little excerpt from one of Charles’ essays on writing that Playboy recently released:
“A writer must keep performing, hitting the high mark or he is down on skid row. And there’s no way back up. For after some years of writing, the soul, the person, the creature becomes useless to operate in any other capacity. He is unemployable. He is a bird in a land of cats. I’d never advise anybody to become a writer, only if writing is the only thing that keeps you from going insane. Then, perhaps, it’s worth it.”
You’re quotes have inspired me to add several to my own page:
As counterpoint to my scientific studies: “The imagination is not a State: it is the Human existence itself.” - William Blake
And succor for the unrecognized: “There is no book so bad that some good can not be got out of it,” - Pliny the Elder
darryl, that last thing you said in the comments on your wonderful “postcard” makes me want to try to write a play because that’s what i am scared off. good on ya, mate. also, i do think you have a sunnier outlook on life than vonnegut and your poetry benefits.
Glad you liked All the Time in the World. That was written about a cat relaxing on the sidewalk in front of my apt. in New Orleans during what was pretty much a total solar eclipse, about 82-83, I think. Gave everything a weird double shadow…
I really enjoy your work. I absolutely loved “There’s Not One Single Word” especially. There’s a reading coming up here in Seattle. I usually just go and listen, but I think I might get up and read that one.
Darryl, thanks so much for taking the time to read Girl and to respond in such a thoughtful way. I know it’s not a cheery one, but I’m glad to hear it was effective.
Jim—thanks for the good heart-felt response.I feel much better now. I love hearing from you at any time for any reason. You’re one of my favorite people on the planet.Good luck with all that work. I know you’re up to task.
Hey, D.P. Thanks for all the reads and nice comments. I’m aware of ‘em and I appreciate ‘em!
If you play guitar I assume you’ve learned a lot of Lennon songs. If so, what, in your opinion, is his favorite chord, that one which he uses over and over and which tends (imo) to add that certain biting flavor to his songs?
(I’ve formed *my* opinion, just wonder if someone else agrees.)
D.P. you’ve been consistently kind and encouraging to many people here, including moi. Don’t doubt for a moment that you’re appreciated. Writing is a lonely business, and I think necessarily so, but just as necessary to most is a sense of community.
Hey, thank you for your very generous comments about my story! I’m beginning to feel quite comfortable here at Fictionaut thanks to you and other kind people!
Loving your work, DP, and your point of view. Being for Being Against the Common Sense really stood out for me, as did Look Like the Sea is Always, I Want This To Be (revised), and Bio 101. (I’m married to a philosopher!)
Hi Darryl,
Thanks for stopping by to visit prose poems. It was great to see your post there - you’re brave to leap in and share your work first! I’d love to read more of your poems. I’m still getting the hang of this site, so bear with me while I discover what works & what doesn’t. There’s so much great stuff here - easy to get lost.
I was just taking a look here again and have to say I agree 100% with your thought “There’s also a belief that the world becomes what we say it is—that we are creating the world every time we speak it. And because of this belief poetry has the power to change things, I think, for the better, for the wiser, for the kinder. It’s at least worth a try.”
I absolutely think imagery shapes and influences life. Writing good things is worth more than a try. I generate my share of drivel and wish sometimes I could write something truly beautiful. Failing that I am thankful for those who do.
As soon as I understand poetry I’ll get back to you. (My poetry is just like my prose - if you can imagine what that might be like.)
Cheers
Larry
Hi Darryl, I truly appreciate kind words about Hurlophobia. This story evolved a lot over a long span… I never appreciated the father’s love for the son until reading your comments. It’s amazing how close I can get to a story (MY OWN STORY!) and still not really “see” that angle until a great reader like yourself points it out. Thanks again my friend. It’s comments like yours and readers like yourself that keep me writing. David
Darryl, the poem I mentioned: “Freundinnen: Her Lost Friend Poem” can be found at: http://annbogle.blogspot.com/2007/01/freundinnnen-her-lost-friend-poem.html. I didn’t submit it to journals (I wasn’t trying to publish poems then). A teacher critiqued it as “too general.” I think I ignored her take. The poem has had its readers looking for poems about lost friendship.
Thanks so much for your kind words on Singing River. My insecurities were starting to get the better of me. You gave me just the encouragement I needed. I’ll have to check out your work.
thanks for the note. I looked up John Bellairs and I think I’ll like uploading his work into toddler bot when the time is right. I’m pretty new new but I look forward to reading your work.
Thanks for dropping by to look at my wall, and especially for taking a peek at “True Lu.” I agree: no matter how fine an idea, beauty must live in the words that make it.
Thanks for the welcoming note, Darryl! The authors I listed have always inspired me (as well as many others, both Russian and international), but my writing is actually pretty minimalistic. Will post something soon.
thanks for the comment Darryl! the story just kind of happened, and the ending was a little rushed, but I wanted to keep it all as brief as possible. win some lose some!
Lauren’s right! You are poetic in your reviews. Thanks so much for your comment on My son the rabbi. Greatly appreciate it, man. I’ll check out your poem soon and thanks for sending to me.
darryl— in response to your challenge for a woozy tale from the big boat stuck in the ice…the novel is a-coming, as big and bold and magenta-ish as an ice breaker! (but as fragile as new ice too) . wishing you the best with your enticingly-titled poetry pieces…
Hey man. I’ve actually written a short story and a novella since we last spoke. Won’t be posted until published ; ) Nah, I got the raven photo off a website. I dunno, got a thing for ravens.
I checked out a few of your pieces and was happy to find some fire. I haven’t added anything yet up here (overworked, 14 month-old daughter, etc.) but I’m hoping people will follow my novel in progress here: http://twitter.com/dahveed_miller
Writing is important because it is abstraction x 2: complex things, both physical and intangible, represented by words that are not those things, and then the words themselves represented by silly squiggles doubly removed from what they refer to…. The mental wiring necessary for this feat of comprehension has in its evolution lifted us from the mud, toward the angels. Besides that, it’s fun.
Why is writing important to me? Well, because it beats the pants off other forms of expression like road rage or becoming one of those first-cut contestants on American Idol.
Beanworld! Fine choice. You have an interesting list yourself, amigo. And you put a hell of a lot of thought into your profile. Need to reread it, but first I want to check out your other writing.
Thank you for reading Three Haiku. Glad you like them.
And thank you for the lovely comment on ‘Cider Bubbles,’ Darryl!
Thanks DP for reading and giving me a little star on Can’t Wait. Makes me feel so good :) Peace…
Thanks for the comment on ‘Love,’Darryl. Glad it seemed to arouse emotion.
Lovely to meet you, Darryl. Thanks so much for your kind words about my radiometer poem.
Thx DP for reading and enjoying my piece
Hi, Darryl, thanks for reading ‘I heard the news today, oh boy!’ Your helpful comment is greatly appreciated.
Wow! Thanks for your comment on and fav of “Self Alaska,” Darryl.
Thanks, Darryl, for your “Godot-Shaped Hole” comment. - GL
Thanks for the welcome! :) And I agree, Sedaris is extremely funny. haha
Thanks for the words of welcome. I’m deeply interested in evolutionary concepts and I love how Dawkins brings it all to life. Looking at your extensive music list, thought you mind not mind a shameless plug: check out “Michou” at itsnicetomichou.com An up and comer…
Ja, thanks for your welcome
Hi Darryl. Thanks for the welcome, mate. Chuffed to be here :)
Hi Darryl, thanks for your comment on Infinity Pool :)
Hi Darryl, thanks for your comment re “Poleward” - George
Thanks, Darryl. Glad you liked “Something, He Wrote.”
Thanks for the welcome!
Thanks for the great comment and the fave on Midnight Riders, Darryl. So glad you liked the bit about the stars!
Thanks for the welcome…lovely to be here.
“It seems to be accepted nowadays more than ever that killing,individual and mass killing,is the order of the day;it is accepted.”—Henry Miller
Thanks for commenting on my itty, bitty Tanka. Everything is new for me here but I can’t wait to sample all the tasty morsels. Like you, I love poetry.
Hi Darryl, and thanks for such a great welcome message. :) I did take Automated Alice out from the library once, but I haven’t got around to reading it yet; it’s still on my vast to-be-read list. Yeah, Vurt has an amazing energy; and I agree with you about Book 7 of Harry Potter. I’ll definitely keep your recommendation in mind, and add you so I can come back and read some of your poetry. Thanks again!
Thanks for responding to “If Dogs Should Come,” Darryl. I appreciate the comment.
Darryl, thanks for reading and commenting on “I know everything’s broken, but still I pretend”! Your kind words are much appreciated.
Thanks for the kind words on “Allergic to Love,” Darryl. I appreciate the read.
Darryl, yes. Glad you enjoyed ‘Leaving.’
Thank you for reading The Abyss of Contemplative Hatred. Much appreciated.
Thank you Darryl. I wrote For Those Who Ask Why 2 months ago when I actually did it, and am grateful for your support, which also works on many levels.
Thanks, Darryl, for your your generous appraisal of “It’s Like.” Your kindness to writers is unbounded.
Thanks Darryl, for Girls with Guns. I was suprised to get your note since you are so much a denizen of the kinder, gentler world. Good to hear from you. Cheers.
I love this profile picture, Darryl. Thanks for reading “Florida.”
Thanks for the kind words on Black Swan, Darryl! Hope you’re doing well.
Thanks for reading Flesh & Blood, Darryl. As usual your comments are very helpful!
Darryl, I always appreciate your insightful comments.
Thank you so much, and for the fav, too.
Thank you for reading my little piece. Happy to have your comments!
Thank you for nice words, DP, re: Prologue
Thanks for commenting on Spicer found poem. And huge thank you for your extremely generous comment on “Getting Godless”! You’re hired, Darryl!
thanks for the hello darryl.
Greetings and salutations! Thanks for the read on Chatty Cassie! Appreciated!
Thanks, Darryl. Appreciate the comment on “Processes.”
Hi Darryl. Thanks for the welcome! I enjoyed reading your poetry.
Regards,
Matt S
Thanks, Darryl! Glad you liked “Found Poem.”
A brief glance at the depth of quotes, stories, and insights shared on your homepage leaves me agog. I have been a member in solitude for too long and have committed myself to more active partipation.
Thank you for jogging loose my epiphany. Indeed, I must step up my game.
JG
Thanks, Darryl, for reading and liking “Violet Rivers.”
Thank you for reading and commenting on The People I Thought I Knew. Thank you for the suggestions. What part of the story did you see everything coming? Maybe I should change the title, too.
Hi, Darryl, thanks for reading Unoriginal Sin. I appreciate your comments and I agree with your assessment.
Oh, gosh, Darryl, thanks. But what you see is probably just my own great admiration. :)
Thanks, Darryl, for your comments on “Goodbye.” Parting is always such sweet sorrow.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting on “Deep Pockets”! Your kind feedback inspires me today :)
Argument - you think? ;) Thanks for reading After Dinner, etc. I know it’s not poetry but I’m always curious as to what you’ll say.
Darryl, I can’t thank you enough for taking the time to read Star Anise. Your feedback means a lot.
DP, thanks for your lovely words on Summer in the City and your fav, most appreciated
Thanks for the kind words on my piece today!
Hi Darryl,
Thanks so much for reading & commenting on “Goodnight Dogs” - I’m so glad you liked the story!
Thanks, Darryl! Glad you liked “The Sky is Simply White.”
Darryl,
Thanks for your generous comment about “Magritte.” Much appreciated!
Darryl, thanks for your note today. Hope you’re doing well.
Darryl, thank you for the kind comment on my story.
Darryl, thank you for the warm welcome! And if my writing isn’t so interesting, maybe my smile with make up for it.
Darryl, thanks for reading “Kiss & make up,” and thanks for your kind comments. - Ry
Thanks, Darryl for your well wishes and for stopping by my scarcely used profile. I’m just getting started on Fictionaut, but the experience has been fun so far.
Thank you Darryl, it’s good to know you. It’s great to see the name Wallace Stevens here.
Thank you, Darryl!
Glad you liked “The Transportation of Hens.” Thanks for commenting.
DP, I’m so happy you enjoyed Deer, and thanks so much for the fav
Thanks so much, Darryl! Can’t wait to find a few moments to start poking around and post some work! :)
Darryl - thank you for your gorgeous comment on my story X. As always, you warm my heart.
Darryl, thanks for reading Unfit and commenting.
Thanks, Darryl, for your comment on “The Meaning of Life.” Appreciate it!
Thanks for your kind words about my poem, Darryl :-)
Thanks Darryl for reading my story ‘Pale Heart’. It means a lot to a Hong Kong writer in English (it’s a rarity) like me. Looking forward to reading your work here.
Thanks for being such a nice guy, and a great writer too. Have a wonderful and creative weekend.
Darryl, Thanks for the warm welcome to Fictionaut. Your bio is so detailed, I don’t when I will get to your contributions! So looking forward to reading your work. If there’s anything you like of my writing, do spread the word. It’s tough to be the new kid on the block. Best, ~ J
Darryl Price, you are a Prince! Thank you.
Darryl Price,
I totally agree about Melanie Rae Thon—thank you for the comment—and would add that Sweet Hearts is brilliant!!! I reviewed it on Amazon: take a look. So glad to be here with you and the other good folks here!
Mary
Hey! Thanks for the my very first fictionaut greeting!
Thanks for the welcome ;)
Darryl, not sure where VOICES is/are? Can you send a link.
Darryl, your interview on “Voices” is quite wonderful! Bravo!
Darryl, thank you for reading, War Nurses and Lost Fathers. I’ve worked on that poem for several years, on and off. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Darryl, thank you so much for such insightful comments, I knew you would understand.
Hey, thanks for the welcome :)
Thanks Darryl for reading & commenting on “I don’t have a gun”!
Thank you for the suggestion for Bean Talk.
Hi Darryl, thank you for reading Hummingbird and for your kind comment - I really appreciate it. M
“One who loves beauty never grows old.”—Franz Kafka
My daughter Lola would agree with Kafka. She is fond of saying, “You’re not old ‘til you stop having fun.”
Thanks Darryl, for replying on my thread. I loved what you wrote. You me, and everyone who has made a comment on, Should Our Writing Be Censored, seem to agree that on the whole it should not.
Darryl,
Thank you for reading An Italian Lunch (revision) and for your wonderful words. Your comments really made my day!
Thanks, Darryl, for taking the time to read a long story, Dream. I’m looking forward to reading more of your work, also. And I’m younger than that now, too.
Darryl,
Thanks for your fabulous compliment on An Italian Lunch!
Thanks for the welcome, Darryl.
I see you like the Beatles - one dubious claim to fame I have is that I booked them for a gig in August 1962 - they cost £30!
Darryl, thanks so much for commenting on Elephant. Glad this struck a chord, and the poem you wrote in response is just wonderful. Thank you for that especially!
Thanks for the comment on my poem, A Deal With Tomorrow. Cheers
Thanks, Darryl, for your comment about “In the Pastel City.” I really appreciate it!
Darryl- thank you so much for your comment on my piece! I truly appreciated it. Now I’m gonna have to start reading through your library!
DP — Thanks for checking out my short. I appreciate it, S
Hey you, thanks for reading SURVIVOR and your kind weepy words ;^) Peace…
Darryl, you are such an insightful reader, as well as tremendously prolific poet! Thank you so much :-)
Daryl, i am so glad that you liked Flatfish! I loved your work again. Your logic has so much invisible sense…
Thank you for commenting on Nothing to Do. Based on what others have said, I’m thinking about cutting the last stanza and maybe using it for another poem.
Haha sorry but what does ‘oUCH’ mean exactly? That’s a new comment for me.
DP, just wanted to thank you again for your sweet message on Floating Islands. I am so enamored with (by?) that Duras book The Lover. It was impactful on my writing, and somehow made a place in my brain… thus the poem
Thanks, Darryl, for words for “Lost in Transit”!
Glad you liked The Luckiest Guy Around. Thank you for reading.
Darryl, thanks for the very kind welcome…I look forward to reading your work.
Best wishes to you.
Hi Darryl, thanks so much for your comment on A Knobby Thing. I LIKE your response to the last line! Can’t wait to see… :)
Thank you for your submission to Like Birds Lit! :) I look forward to reading your piece.
Thanks Darryl for the welcome. I spent a whole summer in high school reading Doyle. I hope that my story ‘London Fog’ can be a fraction has good as what others have published on this website.
Thanks for the welcome Darryl. Good to be here!
Darryl, that’s a very thoughtful comment on “Hymen.” It would be a joy for me to think the story bears rereadings and that it entertains. Thanks.
Thanks for the welcome. It’s always nice when someone does that on a site like this. Just finding my way around right now.
Thanks muchly, Darryl :-)
This Girl. ;-)
Daryl, thank you for your wonderful thoughts on That Girl. And for the poetry, which I love.
Thank you for the kind words and critique on The Winds of May, or should I say now, Winds of May. Very helpful suggestions.
Darryl, Thanks for checking out my story “Secrets.”
Thanks for your comments on “Color Wheel,” Darryl. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Darryl,
Thank you again for the read and your wonderful comments. I also have up Things I Should Have Done - #1, and Things I Should Have Done #2. If you have a chance, I’d love your thoughts.
Thanks for the welcome. And The Little Prince is a great book.
Many thanks, Daryl, for reading “Hammer Nail Nail” and for your kind comments!
Thank you for reading “10 Jobs”. Much appreciated!
Thank you for reading Muted Corners. I think, too, the last five lines are the strongest.
Darryl - cucucajoob for Poor Man. Tried to show the wonder and glee of a kid that age on the adventure of his life. Think I succeeded best in the passage you cited.
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down yet) to human experience. Thanks for this! You’re definitely becoming one of my must-read writers. -A.
Just wanted to say that with “Undertakers of the Dead,” you’ve described (so beautifully) just what it’s like to try and put world and self into beautiful words, only to feel like the attempt upends itself - first because the world is not so precise as a poem in the making (and yet only a poem can really describe it!) and second because we look around at our bookshelf and suspect that others have already done it, and better. You’ve captured the writer’s, or specifically the poet’s, experience in so many great lines. Three of my favorites: - “I have to swallow those … perfected words of the other alive poets” - “just about anything you see will do, just buffeted back and forth” - the kid putting together the toy train track “found in a crummy basement somewhere labelled ‘missing some parts’” Still, even though the piece speaks to the poet’s experience, it speaks to the world and whoever wants to listen. It speaks not just to the poet’s experience, but (somehow - can’t quite set it d
As I said to Walter and Sam, it’s one of my darker time poems. Don’t go there too often.
So many suicides here in Australia, especially teenagers. I’ts so sad, all that lost potential. Appreciate your comments very much, Darryl.
Thank you, Darryl, for reading and commenting on “Classmates”—you get so much about the poems, so good to know!
Thanks for your comments, Darryl. Much appreciated.
Darryl- Thanks so much for the kind words on “Letter to Neruda”, so appreciated! :) -Sam
Wow, very comprehensive profile,Darryl. Off to read one of your stories now.
Hi Darryl,
Thanks for making me feel welcome, and even better, checking out my blog. Much appreciated.
Good old Brautigan. I think “Corporal” is the finest piece of short-short fiction I’ve read.
Thanks for the welcome! Glad to be here.
Thanks for commenting on Pleiku Jacket, Darryl. I do love working with the mundane and the horrific and am glad you found that the mixture worked in this piece.
thanks for the welcome! I’m out of town right now, but as soon as i get home i’ll have time to check out this site. Looks like a good one.
Thanks for reading Garden Light. Glad you think it sweet.
Hi Darryl, thanks for the warm welcome! Still finding my way around here, so I’ll be back when I’ve got my bearings. Just posted my first piece on Fictionaut, ‘Letter to Neruda’. Cheers!
Thanks for the nice comment—I love it that croci is a word (verified by Wikipedia!)—and not octupi. Your remark was a friendly welcome to Fictionaut, which I am still learning to navigate (just figured out how to get to my “wall” without following the link in my email).
Thank you for reading and commenting on Waiting for a Terrorist. I appreciate you taking the time.
thank you for your kind words about “Picnic”. I really believe in invisible animals…
haha thank you.
Thanks for comments on Driven/Eyes - one kind thank you deserves
Thanks for the nice comments on my film star piece, Daryl!
Darryl Price, thank you for the welcome. I look forward to reading your works. Hopefully their as interseting as your photograph is, but I imagine them to be so.
Thanks, Darryl for Venice, got a few more on Eddie’s travels I’m cleaning up, look forward to reading more of yours
Thanks for your comment on Sphincter.
Darryl - thanks for gander and words on Poetipedia, I think it subscribes to your personal philosophy. Great profile, an architecture in itself. Treatise on Beatles is bloody balmy, although loved by many knee-high to a walrus, us walruses know what you’re sayin. Stay diverse! I’ll check out yours.
Thanks for stopping by.
Thanks for the kind comment - this is all new to me, Martha
Thanks for the comment — I agree, many have preconceived notions about Charles and don’t take him seriously. He had such a way with language though … a way of getting to the “core” of things. Here is a little excerpt from one of Charles’ essays on writing that Playboy recently released:
“A writer must keep performing, hitting the high mark or he is down on skid row. And there’s no way back up. For after some years of writing, the soul, the person, the creature becomes useless to operate in any other capacity. He is unemployable. He is a bird in a land of cats. I’d never advise anybody to become a writer, only if writing is the only thing that keeps you from going insane. Then, perhaps, it’s worth it.”
You’re quotes have inspired me to add several to my own page:
As counterpoint to my scientific studies: “The imagination is not a State: it is the Human existence itself.” - William Blake
And succor for the unrecognized: “There is no book so bad that some good can not be got out of it,” - Pliny the Elder
darryl, that last thing you said in the comments on your wonderful “postcard” makes me want to try to write a play because that’s what i am scared off. good on ya, mate. also, i do think you have a sunnier outlook on life than vonnegut and your poetry benefits.
Thanks for reading Liquid Compass. Glad you enjoyed it.
Glad you liked All the Time in the World. That was written about a cat relaxing on the sidewalk in front of my apt. in New Orleans during what was pretty much a total solar eclipse, about 82-83, I think. Gave everything a weird double shadow…
Hi!! Thank you for the great spring wishes. I hope you’re having a wonderful spring, too! It’s been 75 degrees here in WV.
Thank you for the welcome, Daryl. I look forward to reading your work.
“Eddie Says” is lucky to have you as a reader—thanks so much!
Darryl, thank you for reading “Mind You Don’t” and for your kind (and encouraging!) words.
thank you, darryl, for your kind words on “don’t rub me out now” - much appreciated.
Thank you for your comments on “Maps,” Darryl—I really appreciate them!
I really enjoy your work. I absolutely loved “There’s Not One Single Word” especially. There’s a reading coming up here in Seattle. I usually just go and listen, but I think I might get up and read that one.
Thank you very much, that made me smile. :)
Darryl, thanks so much for taking the time to read Girl and to respond in such a thoughtful way. I know it’s not a cheery one, but I’m glad to hear it was effective.
butterfly feet. i mean, that’s beautiful.
Thanks for the warm welcome DP. And I love your treatises above. Amen, brother…
Haven’t read the beer one yet. I do realy like Skinny Legs quite a bit, though.
Jim—thanks for the good heart-felt response.I feel much better now. I love hearing from you at any time for any reason. You’re one of my favorite people on the planet.Good luck with all that work. I know you’re up to task.
Hey Darryl! Thank you for the lovely comment you left on 634, I really appreciate it.
Thank you so much for the kind welcome! You have an amazing music taste. Looking forward to reading what you’re doing.
Thanks for the hearty welcome!
Hey, where did Ducks go? I was just going to comment on how much I love it!
As always, thank you!
Thanks for the greetings, I’m looking forward to spending more time with this community soon!
Hi there!
Thanks for checking out the blog!
Nice pieces – of what I’ve read of your work so far. I’ll explore a bit more later…
Hey, D.P. Thanks for all the reads and nice comments. I’m aware of ‘em and I appreciate ‘em!
If you play guitar I assume you’ve learned a lot of Lennon songs. If so, what, in your opinion, is his favorite chord, that one which he uses over and over and which tends (imo) to add that certain biting flavor to his songs?
(I’ve formed *my* opinion, just wonder if someone else agrees.)
D.P., thanx for your comments on “The spaces between words”. I wasnt sure if that line you commented on worked. So I’m glad you liked it!
D.P. I just have to say your writing gets to me.
D.P.,
Thanks for your encouragement. I really appreciate it.
thank you so much for your lovely words about Kumquat Soda!
Thanks for the welcome, D.P. Hope to start reading and commenting here this weekend!
thank you for the welcome! cheers! :)
Hi D.P.,
I was just brave enough and joined the poetry group.
Thanks for stopping by.
Hey D.P.
I knew Sunflower would sound great. Finn did a nice job
Really enjoyed Finnegan’s reading of your poem, D.P.!
Hi D.P. and thanks for the warm welcome.
D.P. you’ve been consistently kind and encouraging to many people here, including moi. Don’t doubt for a moment that you’re appreciated. Writing is a lonely business, and I think necessarily so, but just as necessary to most is a sense of community.
D.P.
Thanks for the comment about the stories. You are a prince.
Hi Angela. I’m a quick learner.
Hi D.P, and thanks for the welcome. You sure have written a lot of poetry for somebody who was born only six months ago. :)
congrats on the poem in fourpaperletters, d.p.! happy NY to you!
Thanks, D.P., for your nice words. Very encouraging.
d.p. i like your new pic. you’ve been dubbed fnaut’s romantic heart by gary and i concur with that. go well into that new year, mate!
Thank you, D.P.
I’m happy you like it. I thought I’d just let it flow. I’m enjoying your poetry. Thanks for putting it out there.
Hey, thank you for your very generous comments about my story! I’m beginning to feel quite comfortable here at Fictionaut thanks to you and other kind people!
powerful thoughts in your contribution in the matchbook discussion forum, d.p., thanks!
Hi DP,
Loving your work, DP, and your point of view. Being for Being Against the Common Sense really stood out for me, as did Look Like the Sea is Always, I Want This To Be (revised), and Bio 101. (I’m married to a philosopher!)
Kim
Thank you for the kind words. I’m enjoying your poetry.
Hey, sweetie! Coming up for air now. Just stopping in to say hi and that I’m thinking of you. All warmest, xo! H
Thanks for the post! I think it’s the salty air.
The Centaur was his personal favorite. I still can’t believe he’s gone.
Thank you, and may your days be peaceful and bright. LS
Hey, D.P., Thanks for the kind words re: “Flower..”!
Thanks for the words of welcome—glad to be here. Looking forward to checking out your work. N.R.
Thanks for your sweet welcome words on my wall.
Hey, thanks for the read on Stray Horses. I thought you’d like some of the high language, you poet you.
Thanks for the kind welcome!
Hi Darryl,
Thanks for stopping by to visit prose poems. It was great to see your post there - you’re brave to leap in and share your work first! I’d love to read more of your poems. I’m still getting the hang of this site, so bear with me while I discover what works & what doesn’t. There’s so much great stuff here - easy to get lost.
thanks for the welcome. looking forward to all this is.
thanks, darryl, i’ve managed to pack in a lot of odd experiences!
thanks for the welcome! glad to be a part of it.
Thanks for your support,Daryl.
Hey Darryl! Glad you like the blog - keep up the pestering!
Thank you for your kind words. Fictionaut is pretty cool.
Cheers, Darryl!
Thanks for visiting my blog; it makes me happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks especially for leaving a message.
Thanks for writing on my wall. Dig your reading list. Cheers!
Thank you! I’m trying to learn my way around here.
Hi Darryl, thanks so much for your feedback.
I was just taking a look here again and have to say I agree 100% with your thought “There’s also a belief that the world becomes what we say it is—that we are creating the world every time we speak it. And because of this belief poetry has the power to change things, I think, for the better, for the wiser, for the kinder. It’s at least worth a try.”
I absolutely think imagery shapes and influences life. Writing good things is worth more than a try. I generate my share of drivel and wish sometimes I could write something truly beautiful. Failing that I am thankful for those who do.
As soon as I understand poetry I’ll get back to you. (My poetry is just like my prose - if you can imagine what that might be like.)
Cheers
Larry
Hi Darryl, I truly appreciate kind words about Hurlophobia. This story evolved a lot over a long span… I never appreciated the father’s love for the son until reading your comments. It’s amazing how close I can get to a story (MY OWN STORY!) and still not really “see” that angle until a great reader like yourself points it out. Thanks again my friend. It’s comments like yours and readers like yourself that keep me writing. David
Hi Darryl,
Thank you for your warm welcome to Fictionaut. Appreciate your comments and look forward to reading your stories. Many thanks. Rob
Darryl, the poem I mentioned: “Freundinnen: Her Lost Friend Poem” can be found at: http://annbogle.blogspot.com/2007/01/freundinnnen-her-lost-friend-poem.html. I didn’t submit it to journals (I wasn’t trying to publish poems then). A teacher critiqued it as “too general.” I think I ignored her take. The poem has had its readers looking for poems about lost friendship.
Thanks for the encouraging comments. Don’t worry, I wasn’t giving up on the story. I just decided I didn’t want to share it in this forum right now.
Thanks for the suggestion regarding WS Merwin’s short stories. I have only read some of his poetry.
Thanks so much for your kind words on Singing River. My insecurities were starting to get the better of me. You gave me just the encouragement I needed. I’ll have to check out your work.
thanks for the note. I looked up John Bellairs and I think I’ll like uploading his work into toddler bot when the time is right. I’m pretty new new but I look forward to reading your work.
Thanks for your note, Darryl. I’m enjoying the work posted here and the contact with writers.
Thanks for dropping by to look at my wall, and especially for taking a peek at “True Lu.” I agree: no matter how fine an idea, beauty must live in the words that make it.
Hey Darryl, thanks for the wonderful comment on “Chumming…”, and thanks for the read.
Indeed, Darryl. I miss DFW too. And I love Chip’s writing. Not as much as his design though. He’s pretty much my hero in that world.
Thanks for the super kind words!
Thanks for your comments on my story. They are much appreciated.
Thanks for the welcoming note, Darryl! The authors I listed have always inspired me (as well as many others, both Russian and international), but my writing is actually pretty minimalistic. Will post something soon.
Thanks, bro.
Isn’t Gould’s Book of Fish strange and beautiful?
thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my work, Darryl
thanks for the comment Darryl! the story just kind of happened, and the ending was a little rushed, but I wanted to keep it all as brief as possible. win some lose some!
Thanks so much, Darryl, for your lovely comments on “Dinner With The Lydia”—I really appreciate them.
Small beer? It’s like small potatoes, except you can drink them.
thanks for the howdy. hopefully I’ll get something up this week and we can see if all this fuss is worthwhile.
I love it! :) Hoping you have a great week! All best and warmest, xo, H
Thanks Darryl for your message. Sorry it’s taken me so long to respond!
Hi Darryl,
I’m so sorry. I just realized I never responded to your warm welcome. Thank you for your kind comments. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Hello! Thank you so much! I’m checking out some of yours right now. :-)
Darryl Price! We have the same birthday! I must read one of your stories…
Lauren’s right! You are poetic in your reviews. Thanks so much for your comment on My son the rabbi. Greatly appreciate it, man. I’ll check out your poem soon and thanks for sending to me.
Thanks for the note!
thanks so much for your lovely comment on “chickens and eggs” and some of my others. you are poetic even in your reviews.
Thanks, Darryl, so much!
thanks for your note darryl. i’ll get there slowly
Thanks! Hope yours is happy too.
darryl— in response to your challenge for a woozy tale from the big boat stuck in the ice…the novel is a-coming, as big and bold and magenta-ish as an ice breaker! (but as fragile as new ice too) . wishing you the best with your enticingly-titled poetry pieces…
Hey man. I’ve actually written a short story and a novella since we last spoke. Won’t be posted until published ; ) Nah, I got the raven photo off a website. I dunno, got a thing for ravens.
Hi Darryl,
Thanks so much for your feedback on my piece! Looking forward to reading more of yours. :) Hope you’re having an excellent week.
All warmest and best, xo,
H
Hi Darryl! Thanks for your kind words about Touching Tires. So glad you liked it. Your comments are very insightful/interesting.
Yeah, Restaurant. Makes me want to go read it again. Right now. Good poems, thanks for the message.
Hi Darryl, Thanks for your message. Great Poems. Best, J
I write because I have to, because if I don’t I start to feel ill. Shaping words is how I make sense of the world. Thanks for asking, Darryl!
Thanks Darryl,
I checked out a few of your pieces and was happy to find some fire. I haven’t added anything yet up here (overworked, 14 month-old daughter, etc.) but I’m hoping people will follow my novel in progress here: http://twitter.com/dahveed_miller
look forward to more downstream,
david
Writing is important because it is abstraction x 2: complex things, both physical and intangible, represented by words that are not those things, and then the words themselves represented by silly squiggles doubly removed from what they refer to…. The mental wiring necessary for this feat of comprehension has in its evolution lifted us from the mud, toward the angels. Besides that, it’s fun.
Why is writing important to me? Well, because it beats the pants off other forms of expression like road rage or becoming one of those first-cut contestants on American Idol.