Hello Finnegan, I had to cut back on FB but am now writing here on Fictionaut. Are you threatening to disappear? But I just got here! How oh how will I read you, and you, me?
I’ve posted some flash (learned from you), and a poem or two. Write to me, do. ~J
I loved your chillax conversation with the ever thrilling Miss Pokrass on the Smokelong blog this morning. It was such a blast to listen to. Won’t there be one single place where someone like me can write to yours truly after you vanish? I promise I won’t bombard you.
Thanks so much, Finnegan, for reading “Classmates,” and your comments. You know, if you had been there, I’m sure we would have let you peek into the girls’ room.
Finnegan, my browser is malfunctioning so I couldn’t leave a message in the box on your interview, box kept disappearing. Oh! Kind of like you — you are the master of smoke and mirrors! Wonderful interview
Finnie— I’ve noticed a number of your contacts have pseudonyms, is this a cult thing? I want a pseudonym, can you suggest one? (and don’t say motherfucker)
Good morning, Mr Flawnt, and thank you so much for your kind comment on my story. It is lovely to see you on here. I am new and lost, but now I am going to enjoy a Flawnt-fest of stories for breakfast. I already enjoyed Tickled Pink.
Finnegan, thanks so much for your review of “Snowed In.” I wrote this one some years ago, and was shamelessly copying Hemingway and Carver at the time. Not bad teachers, in my opinion.
Finnegan, perhaps you recall my short story, “Irish Salad.” This evening, I drove to that bar, called McCoy’s Public House, in Excelsior, Minnesota, beauty of which, and I asked the bartender, what is the wood? I told him, I met the owner, and there was a story about the wood, and he said, “I’ll ask,” not that he seemed particularly young. When he returned, he said, “mahogany.” The mahogany in that bar is from Ireland. Then I asked, “What city?” and he said, “Ireland.” He would ask no further.
It’s well that you prudently disguised your identity in advance of your scurrilous joining of the name of our revered former vice president to the term of abuse which I will refrain from quoting.
Hi Finnegan. I was taking a peek at Divine Dirt Quarterly’s second issue and saw your story Taciturn. I have a poem in their current issue and a short story in the previous issue. I saw your name and realized I’d seen you around fictionaut! Small world I guess. :-)
I would definitely be up for a “keep it/get it going” discussion group for the novel. One thing I have found useful in writing this novel is my understanding of short fiction. The chapters alternate narrators (first person then third) and so it has been useful for me to look at them as short pieces, not stand alone, obviously, because it’s a novel (and yes, I have heard of chapters :) but as pieces that have their own arc within the larger arc. I don’t have an MFA or many writing classes under my belt, so I don’t have a big lexicon of terms to use when writing fiction. But arc, I get.
Writing a novel is driving me crazy because I truly love short stories and especially flash fiction. I also love the story of the novel, but it’s very plot driven, which isn’t exactly my strength. I think I’m a more voice driven writer. So much to manage over so many more pages. I’ve written a couple of novels (unpublished) but this is the first one an agent has been interested (not signed with him though). I want to finish it more quickly than I seem to be able to. And also one of the characters is scary and haunts my sleep. More?
Thanks for the warm welcome to The Paddy Whacker, the lovely new name, and your comment on my story. You may be right about recovery from academia, but I have to keep trying.
Sweet! I’ll definitely keep it classy. I may send over a rough draft before I do anything else with The Fictitious Adventures of the Fantastic Finnegan Flawnt (the title will probably be something like that). It would be awesome if you read the final, too! Damn, I better do a good job on it. For the past hour I’ve been searching, googling and gathering information about MacGyver for pretty much no reason. Now it’s time to be productive and do some work Under Milk Wood. I’ll keep ya posted.
Hi there Finnegan. I’ve been away from the site for some time, so I thought I’d re-greet the people who’d greeted me when I first signed up.
You’re quite prolific. I just picked one piece from the top of your page (“Obituary for a Poet Heretic”), and really enjoyed it. I look forward to looking through some more.
Finnegan — appreciate your comments on Mrs. Doyle…the Paddy’s Day challenge providing much muse…and having thus far adhered strictly to the rules you set forth all i have left is to work on swearing allegiance to Irish Coffee…a lay up shot for us here in San Francisco!
That was an interesting time, right enough. My expat American Friend, Ann, and I were going into Picadilly just when the bomb went off in the pub. The cops methodically cleared out the entire circus, herding people out, a street at a time. We were trying to get across Picadilly on foot and every street we’d come to, like the spokes of a wheel, there’d be cops with yellow tape strung across walking everyone out. We picked up a little old bag lady in a filthy trench coat, lagging us by a step or two, also trying to cut across to no avail. Finally she says to us, “Is there any way to get to the other side?” And my friend Ann, who has a great heart but slightly weak vision, says to her, ” You can always take a cab.” which, cruel git that I am, I’ve never let her forget…
Best to avoid an author’s favorite passage anyway right? Kill your darlings!
But that said, just brought up from the basement, my copy of Ulysses and my portable Joyce (love that they used to call those paperback collections, “portable” now everything you read is portable) so maybe in this rainy afternoon, I’ll read a little.
The middle of the mornin’ to ya Finnegan, didn’t i notice that beyond the confines of fictionaut was a whole world with various green shades of paddyness and scribbling, and sure wasn’t I surprised that the terrible beautifcations extended into the electronics of it all. Not only that but me cousins across the big pond was talkin and actin the ejet like they was dragged up in cavan. And shoot me if I’m not lying but didn’t i see yerself on the bookoffaces and twatter and all them other fine specimens of electric wrifications and wasn’t there an uncle of mine called clevercelt that followed ya, begob its far from computers the pair of yous was rared.
Thanks for the thumbs up for “Quitting.” If you are quitting, you have my sympathy. Watch your back. Things sneak up on you when you first give up the cigs. The way I finally shed the habit was to join Smokers Anonymous. After that I had to have a few little talks with a psychologist to get my head on straight.
Fin, I’m really sorry about being so bad about e-mail. You wrote me a great note a few weeks ago (as suspected/”feared”, my wife has read, and enjoyed, your work). Hope this finds you well. D
Finny, I think there’s song out there dedicated to you, something about you being ‘simply the best, better than all the rest’? Sound familiar? Anything you want to share about your possible past entanglements with Dame Tina Turner?
Hey Finnegan! Thanks for you lovely comments on 634, fellow food-word-song-writer! I have joined Second Tongue, thanks for the head’s up. So English isn’t your first language either? Woooooah.
Also, Ram Dass? As in, Remember Be Here Now? That’s brill. Ram Dass = Em dash, hahaha. Made me laugh for a ridiculous amount of time.
Well, Sygfryd, I tried to delete my comment on Gyoza last night (but couldn’t figure out how!) partly because I love your exuberance, partly because wasn’t Sinnead O’Conner booed off stage for life for making one little critical comment about Bob Dylan? Anyway, glad you liked the “deal.” So now of course I will think of you every time I eat gyoza, and, with my 11-year-old stepson being half Japanese, gyoza is definitely on the horizon. May the Japanese sun goddess Amaterasu smile on all of us.
Yours truly, Brunhyld
Hey Finn, thanx for your comments on “the spaces between words”. Its funny i didnt intentionally mean for the repetition of words when i wrote it. But it ended up working beautifully as you mentioned. Thank you.
Finnmeister: Thanks for the kind words on Mister Jones. As to the shorter pieces, they all started as poems, were relaxed into prose form, and then restrung as poems once I realized that was their intended form.
I WISH I had more long works in me. Have spent the last 1 & 1/2 years on last one (for which I have high hopes, and for which utilizing the pdf feature on fnaut for re-writing has been an invaluable aid.)
Pardons. Yes, a title change, though I am most assuredly sincere if not awkward. The stars have not been out me for how I can’t say. Gold, blue or otherwise. Forgive me. I relish.
Thank you for the kind words re Ice Cold Melon. Mine will not swell. Promise. I am writing a poem entitled, “I got a star from Finnegan Flawnt,” though.
Wowee, I thought the image source was a photo. Interesting. Your prose is LOTS better than the picture, (I used to be a commercial artist so I feel entitled to an opinion), and I only referenced Dangerfield because the cadence of yours was a little like a stand-up joke. Good cadence to have.
Thanks for the words of welcome and invite to Second Tongue a week or so ago. I listen auf Deutsch far better than I speak these days. Is there a written test for qualification? Verbal? I love your stuff and thanks again for the note.
Hi Finnegan, thanks so much for your comment! I love your “Why I Write…” what a piece in itself! I love “The Serious Writer and His Penis!” What a creative and witty work. Awesome. Take care!
hey guy. not so much a failed attempt as a failed experiment. i was trying to be express quite pure ‘violent passive aggression’ (hmm) but i don’t know. it doesn’t come across like that i think so it is a failure. yes, feel free to direct me to/send me your ‘listen’. differences are intriguing
I read your stories on Hitler’s guardian angel and the serious writer and his penis. I have an inner unicorn with opinions about everything, and those are exactly the sort of things it likes to think about. My inner unicorn also advises me that, in a world where for a woman it’s still by and large considered best to think like a man, look like a child, and not take it personally, yours might be a good male mind to spy on for classified information. I plan on doing that.
Hi Finnegan, what a nice wall note. Indeed, I don’t think I write to know myself anymore. At least I hope not. I don’t think I’d like me very much. Take care man and keep at it, D
Finnegan, thank you so much, man what a good, energizing comment to see about my story. Ha, do we, any of us, know ourselves, particularly those writing?
Thank you, Finnegan! I am excited to be here and have found your writing to be absolutely delightful! (And I haven’t even gotten past your profile page yet! :)
Loving “The Serious Writer” series - I hope you keep writing more of it! Thanks for sharing the link - the pieces reminded me of the sparkly power the vignette, and inspired me to post up one of my old ones too.
Thanks for checking out my blog, Finnegan! “The Venus Flytrap” is actually the name of my column, which appears on alternate weekends in an Indian newspaper as well as on my blog - and I picked it for all its many connotations, of course!
I’m curious - what’s the whole “The Serious Writer and His/Her…” series all about? Wondering if I might jump in on the fun too…
hello to you! it’s funny you should pop up - I just became (intimately) acquainted with the serious writer series yesterday ;) ps. that hat gives me special summertime powers in dreary winters
Hi Finnegan, thanks, my daughter took that picture of me, at the coffee shop. I guess I kind of like it too. Anyway, I was tired of my other photo, ha. Happy 2010!
Personal comedic genius? If the situation’s open, I’ll take the job! Thank you.
As to the accent, living with Dutchies in Spain, stretching my vowels in Austria, then emigrating to the land of a million pronunciations (none of them correct), the Queen moved out of my English in high dudgeon.
“What’s wrong with your voice?” demanded my imperious mother.
“Nothing mum.”
(Indignantly.) “You’re speaking like an American!”
What with that and a growing tendency to show emotion they’ll probably confiscate my British passport!
lol, thanx finn! this site has so many things to discover i just dont have the time, im doing all this at work! im glad to know there are workshops, ill have to check it out!
Hey, Finny! Thanks for supporting me in my brave but perhaps misguided decision to read my own work on video! My friends are rolling around on the floor clutching their stomachs in laugher, but I do not care! The poem is actually what I consider my best work - I don’t quote any others line-by-line to myself. It is the fate of writers to be misunderstood, nicht wahr? You can get up from the floor now.
Finnegan, thanx for your feedback and Im also open to criticism. I keep thinking I should be getting some of that too, it would be more real, you know? Although the good comments are definitely so encouraging! thanx again!
thanx Finn!! i didnt even realize there WAS a wall! I posted another story called “breathing”. It would be nice to get feedback from people, even negative feedback would be better than nothing
I am now of the ilk of two tongues. But I feel pressure. Lots of it.
I will try to write so long as your couch is willing to listen but I fear that these various media are going to make my neuroses become neurotic in their own right. But that may be a good thing. More stories.
Hello Mr. Finnegan. My apologies for being slow to respond. I have been working on my shorts for the past week and haven’t been keeping tabs on the Fictionaut Traffic. Thank you for all your support and encouragement.
finn, thanks for your good wishes about ZOO. i sent you a link, i hope it works. i would LLLLOVEEEE it if you would read Mother Tongue for me!!!! WOW!!! now THERE’s a voice that should read that poem. i’m sure it will be a hit with your Metazen fan club too ;-)
Thanks for the welcome to Second Tongue. I hope to spend more time there soon. At the moment I am kind of overloaded with stuff to do. I like the Vonnegut quote at the top of your site. This is what I need to do today. But away from the computer. (I have a bit of info fatigue.) So on that note…. I’ll drop by again soon I hope!
Finnegan: Thanks for the wall post and the comment on Ikea People. It’s one of those pieces that worked from the beginning. Barely any revising or rethinking. I wish that happened more often! Good to meet you on here.
I’ve really got to figure out a way to get people to try writing in hyperfiction without necessarily having to get the software like I use (Eastgate’s Tinderbox or their Storyspace) which makes the mapping a fun way to write and automatically exports templates into html ready for uploading. If you saw some of my work you might’ve caught some with the inclusion of images though the 100 Days Project pieces were simple with only color changes in the css because I did a story a day. Let me figure out how I can get you started; Scott Garson might be of help here…
You’re a sweetheart, Finny (my pet name for you now)and I appreciate all the support you’ve given me here and made me feel a part of it all. I think my own background as an editor and publisher is what makes me supportive of other writers and want to cheer them on. Your own insight and close reading of the work posted here is a delight to see and has often made me take a second look at stories in which I’ve missed that gem.
SO great to see your comments to “Quiet” - what a charge. Indeed, yes, I am trying to work parts of this story into the novel. Thanks again, my friend. D
Thanks for the greeting, Finnegan (and here I thought that was your real name!). I see from our profile pics that, in addition to a mutual appreciation for science fiction, we are also fellow fans of Dead White Men from the 18th century.
Thank you so much for your warmest of welcomes, and I would like to say that I am very glad that we were able to meet during my former days at Twitter. Knowing you and the esteemed MR>H has been a very inspiring association to two very brilliant writers.
I am glad to be here at Fictionaut, and I am looking forward to learning from the many other inspired writers here as well. Can never have ‘too much’ inspiration.
hi nora! you are very kind and the pleasure of commenting was all mine. also, you are the first person to write on my (so far) virginal wall…thanks for that, too. you have a very interesting life and i am thrilled for your success - on and off this noble platform. berlin is a blast, you’re right!
hi finnegan! thanks for the comments you made about my story “EGG”. they were very perceptive. i see you live in berlin?? it’s one of my favourite cities in the world… “i am likely to visit you in your sleep”.. that’s funny ;)
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Missing you already, Mate. Hope there’s some channel to your future writing, and you, about to open.
Best
david
Hello Finnegan, I had to cut back on FB but am now writing here on Fictionaut. Are you threatening to disappear? But I just got here! How oh how will I read you, and you, me?
I’ve posted some flash (learned from you), and a poem or two. Write to me, do. ~J
I loved your chillax conversation with the ever thrilling Miss Pokrass on the Smokelong blog this morning. It was such a blast to listen to. Won’t there be one single place where someone like me can write to yours truly after you vanish? I promise I won’t bombard you.
Good to see you here on Fictionaut, Finnegan! How’s Berlin, my friend?
Finnegan, I haven’t seen a story from you in a while, I hope you haven’t been sunk in Flatulence
Thanks so much, Finnegan, for reading “Classmates,” and your comments. You know, if you had been there, I’m sure we would have let you peek into the girls’ room.
Thanks for your comment on Pleiku Jacket and having such a physical reaction to it.
hey, enjoyed your piece over at word vamp. off to check out your other stuff here. peace…
ah, yes - another style of writing for the unesteemed Bjorkman to trash, Poetipedia salivates
Finnegan: Thank you for the the kind words about EVENING ALONE. High praise, indeed, from a writer of your caliber. You are a gentle man.
Thanks for your comment on Love, Story. Glad to bond over LeGuin. Nuff said. Very pleased to be here at fnaut and to meet you!
Finnegan, my browser is malfunctioning so I couldn’t leave a message in the box on your interview, box kept disappearing. Oh! Kind of like you — you are the master of smoke and mirrors! Wonderful interview
Kilgore Trout for my pseudonym?
Finnie— I’ve noticed a number of your contacts have pseudonyms, is this a cult thing? I want a pseudonym, can you suggest one? (and don’t say motherfucker)
Yes, I miss my children even when I am with them. If I were a man, I would run around creating hundreds until I dropped down dead.
Good morning, Mr Flawnt, and thank you so much for your kind comment on my story. It is lovely to see you on here. I am new and lost, but now I am going to enjoy a Flawnt-fest of stories for breakfast. I already enjoyed Tickled Pink.
Finnegan, thanks so much for your review of “Snowed In.” I wrote this one some years ago, and was shamelessly copying Hemingway and Carver at the time. Not bad teachers, in my opinion.
Thanks for the comment on “Mt. Hood.” Sorry it made you choke, though.
Hi Finnegan. Thanks for reading and commenting on Eight States Away - I really appreciate it. Your comment, “kafkaesque”….thanks for that!
Thanks for your kind words - great word-portrait of the old guy in Tazy.
Finnegan, perhaps you recall my short story, “Irish Salad.” This evening, I drove to that bar, called McCoy’s Public House, in Excelsior, Minnesota, beauty of which, and I asked the bartender, what is the wood? I told him, I met the owner, and there was a story about the wood, and he said, “I’ll ask,” not that he seemed particularly young. When he returned, he said, “mahogany.” The mahogany in that bar is from Ireland. Then I asked, “What city?” and he said, “Ireland.” He would ask no further.
Thank you for the welcome, Mr. Flawnt. Let’s see what damage I can do on here. Yes?
Finnegan, I’m glad you liked “Estranged.” Kind words, indeed. Thanks!
Hey, thanks for the cool link to the London underground.
Soon as I get a minute, I’m going to take a little vicarious nostalgia trip on the tube…
Thank you, Finnegan, for your note about “Eddie Says.”
Finnegan, thanks for reading — and for your note on - Girl. I’m so glad it worked for you.
Camden Town! That’s the tube stop I was trying to remember for my story! Next in from Hampstead, right?
It’s well that you prudently disguised your identity in advance of your scurrilous joining of the name of our revered former vice president to the term of abuse which I will refrain from quoting.
Hi Finnegan. I was taking a peek at Divine Dirt Quarterly’s second issue and saw your story Taciturn. I have a poem in their current issue and a short story in the previous issue. I saw your name and realized I’d seen you around fictionaut! Small world I guess. :-)
I would definitely be up for a “keep it/get it going” discussion group for the novel. One thing I have found useful in writing this novel is my understanding of short fiction. The chapters alternate narrators (first person then third) and so it has been useful for me to look at them as short pieces, not stand alone, obviously, because it’s a novel (and yes, I have heard of chapters :) but as pieces that have their own arc within the larger arc. I don’t have an MFA or many writing classes under my belt, so I don’t have a big lexicon of terms to use when writing fiction. But arc, I get.
Writing a novel is driving me crazy because I truly love short stories and especially flash fiction. I also love the story of the novel, but it’s very plot driven, which isn’t exactly my strength. I think I’m a more voice driven writer. So much to manage over so many more pages. I’ve written a couple of novels (unpublished) but this is the first one an agent has been interested (not signed with him though). I want to finish it more quickly than I seem to be able to. And also one of the characters is scary and haunts my sleep. More?
Hi Finnegan - thanks for the wall post!! It was my pleasure to fave “At a Welsh Wedding.” It made me giddy :)
Thanks for taking the ride with Beckett and Joyce.
Thanks for the warm welcome to The Paddy Whacker, the lovely new name, and your comment on my story. You may be right about recovery from academia, but I have to keep trying.
Sweet! I’ll definitely keep it classy. I may send over a rough draft before I do anything else with The Fictitious Adventures of the Fantastic Finnegan Flawnt (the title will probably be something like that). It would be awesome if you read the final, too! Damn, I better do a good job on it. For the past hour I’ve been searching, googling and gathering information about MacGyver for pretty much no reason. Now it’s time to be productive and do some work Under Milk Wood. I’ll keep ya posted.
Finnegan, Thanks for you thoughtful comment on my “birds” story. I’m flattered.
Thanks so much, Finnegan. I read your story over at LITSNACK the other day. Righteous. I want to write a story about the Mysterious Mr. Flawnt. May I?
Hi there Finnegan. I’ve been away from the site for some time, so I thought I’d re-greet the people who’d greeted me when I first signed up.
You’re quite prolific. I just picked one piece from the top of your page (“Obituary for a Poet Heretic”), and really enjoyed it. I look forward to looking through some more.
Invisible bonus thank you for the invisible bonus fav!
Finnegan — appreciate your comments on Mrs. Doyle…the Paddy’s Day challenge providing much muse…and having thus far adhered strictly to the rules you set forth all i have left is to work on swearing allegiance to Irish Coffee…a lay up shot for us here in San Francisco!
That was an interesting time, right enough. My expat American Friend, Ann, and I were going into Picadilly just when the bomb went off in the pub. The cops methodically cleared out the entire circus, herding people out, a street at a time. We were trying to get across Picadilly on foot and every street we’d come to, like the spokes of a wheel, there’d be cops with yellow tape strung across walking everyone out. We picked up a little old bag lady in a filthy trench coat, lagging us by a step or two, also trying to cut across to no avail. Finally she says to us, “Is there any way to get to the other side?” And my friend Ann, who has a great heart but slightly weak vision, says to her, ” You can always take a cab.” which, cruel git that I am, I’ve never let her forget…
Best to avoid an author’s favorite passage anyway right? Kill your darlings!
But that said, just brought up from the basement, my copy of Ulysses and my portable Joyce (love that they used to call those paperback collections, “portable” now everything you read is portable) so maybe in this rainy afternoon, I’ll read a little.
Reading your comments on my story just floored me. Thanks so much for reading it and and for everything you said.
Big congrats on elimae, Finnegan.
The middle of the mornin’ to ya Finnegan, didn’t i notice that beyond the confines of fictionaut was a whole world with various green shades of paddyness and scribbling, and sure wasn’t I surprised that the terrible beautifcations extended into the electronics of it all. Not only that but me cousins across the big pond was talkin and actin the ejet like they was dragged up in cavan. And shoot me if I’m not lying but didn’t i see yerself on the bookoffaces and twatter and all them other fine specimens of electric wrifications and wasn’t there an uncle of mine called clevercelt that followed ya, begob its far from computers the pair of yous was rared.
Thanks for the thumbs up for “Quitting.” If you are quitting, you have my sympathy. Watch your back. Things sneak up on you when you first give up the cigs. The way I finally shed the habit was to join Smokers Anonymous. After that I had to have a few little talks with a psychologist to get my head on straight.
Fin, I’m really sorry about being so bad about e-mail. You wrote me a great note a few weeks ago (as suspected/”feared”, my wife has read, and enjoyed, your work). Hope this finds you well. D
“Fungus”is surprising, light. Loved it.
Thank you for the encouragement Finnegan!
I will write more … and, I have to admit — writing is tough!
Finny, I think there’s song out there dedicated to you, something about you being ‘simply the best, better than all the rest’? Sound familiar? Anything you want to share about your possible past entanglements with Dame Tina Turner?
Hey Finn, your comments on “I cant do this anymore” are much appreciated. Thnx!
Hey Finnegan! Thanks for you lovely comments on 634, fellow food-word-song-writer! I have joined Second Tongue, thanks for the head’s up. So English isn’t your first language either? Woooooah.
Also, Ram Dass? As in, Remember Be Here Now? That’s brill. Ram Dass = Em dash, hahaha. Made me laugh for a ridiculous amount of time.
Thanks again!
thanks finnegan. nice to meet you.
You’re a sweetie, Finny!
Well, Sygfryd, I tried to delete my comment on Gyoza last night (but couldn’t figure out how!) partly because I love your exuberance, partly because wasn’t Sinnead O’Conner booed off stage for life for making one little critical comment about Bob Dylan? Anyway, glad you liked the “deal.” So now of course I will think of you every time I eat gyoza, and, with my 11-year-old stepson being half Japanese, gyoza is definitely on the horizon. May the Japanese sun goddess Amaterasu smile on all of us.
Yours truly, Brunhyld
Linda Lovelace was Henri Matisse’s life-long angel, advocate and confidant (she carried him in her silk purse).
Hey Finn, thanx for your comments on “the spaces between words”. Its funny i didnt intentionally mean for the repetition of words when i wrote it. But it ended up working beautifully as you mentioned. Thank you.
Finnmeister: Thanks for the kind words on Mister Jones. As to the shorter pieces, they all started as poems, were relaxed into prose form, and then restrung as poems once I realized that was their intended form.
I WISH I had more long works in me. Have spent the last 1 & 1/2 years on last one (for which I have high hopes, and for which utilizing the pdf feature on fnaut for re-writing has been an invaluable aid.)
Thank you so much for your positive comment. I’m freakingfuckingelated to have such a glittering response! Looking forward to reading yours as well.
Sorry for the mumbling. “The stars have not been out for me, how long I can’t say.”
Pardons. Yes, a title change, though I am most assuredly sincere if not awkward. The stars have not been out me for how I can’t say. Gold, blue or otherwise. Forgive me. I relish.
Thank you for the kind words re Ice Cold Melon. Mine will not swell. Promise. I am writing a poem entitled, “I got a star from Finnegan Flawnt,” though.
Nice being on flawntwalk—don’t mind at all
Sweet. I’m there.
Ha. Cool. Do they have the requisite “EN” tattooed on their impassioned backsides for easy identification?
Wowee, I thought the image source was a photo. Interesting. Your prose is LOTS better than the picture, (I used to be a commercial artist so I feel entitled to an opinion), and I only referenced Dangerfield because the cadence of yours was a little like a stand-up joke. Good cadence to have.
Thanks for the words of welcome and invite to Second Tongue a week or so ago. I listen auf Deutsch far better than I speak these days. Is there a written test for qualification? Verbal? I love your stuff and thanks again for the note.
Thank you for saying kind things about The Line and coffee in the morning under milkwood’s the best way to read anything.
thanks Finnegan, I’m glad you like my blog. Hopefully it will only get better!
-Eddie
your manifesto alone makes you the funnest. i mean, wowzer.
thanks again for reading “matrimony” — i’m thrilled you liked it
Hi Finnegan, thanks so much for your comment! I love your “Why I Write…” what a piece in itself! I love “The Serious Writer and His Penis!” What a creative and witty work. Awesome. Take care!
hey guy. not so much a failed attempt as a failed experiment. i was trying to be express quite pure ‘violent passive aggression’ (hmm) but i don’t know. it doesn’t come across like that i think so it is a failure. yes, feel free to direct me to/send me your ‘listen’. differences are intriguing
Finnegan, thanks for your kind comments on “Havana.” For some reason, I hadn’t followed you before, but I’ve corrected that now!
Wow, thanks for digging “Zero.” If I had a Flawntwalk, you would be on it times a billion.
Hey, thanks for the writing on the wall!
I read your stories on Hitler’s guardian angel and the serious writer and his penis. I have an inner unicorn with opinions about everything, and those are exactly the sort of things it likes to think about. My inner unicorn also advises me that, in a world where for a woman it’s still by and large considered best to think like a man, look like a child, and not take it personally, yours might be a good male mind to spy on for classified information. I plan on doing that.
Finnegan, what do you think about my two new rules?
1. I will no longer remain willfully vague to suggest my narrator has a deeper understanding than is possible with words.
2. I will no longer describe an action followed by its opposite. It’s too easy a way to sound poetic.
Hi Finnegan, what a nice wall note. Indeed, I don’t think I write to know myself anymore. At least I hope not. I don’t think I’d like me very much. Take care man and keep at it, D
Finnegan, thank you so much, man what a good, energizing comment to see about my story. Ha, do we, any of us, know ourselves, particularly those writing?
Thank you for the fav. And for the invite. And for being you. And wonderful.
Thank you, Finnegan! I am excited to be here and have found your writing to be absolutely delightful! (And I haven’t even gotten past your profile page yet! :)
Loving “The Serious Writer” series - I hope you keep writing more of it! Thanks for sharing the link - the pieces reminded me of the sparkly power the vignette, and inspired me to post up one of my old ones too.
Thanks for checking out my blog, Finnegan! “The Venus Flytrap” is actually the name of my column, which appears on alternate weekends in an Indian newspaper as well as on my blog - and I picked it for all its many connotations, of course!
I’m curious - what’s the whole “The Serious Writer and His/Her…” series all about? Wondering if I might jump in on the fun too…
hello to you! it’s funny you should pop up - I just became (intimately) acquainted with the serious writer series yesterday ;) ps. that hat gives me special summertime powers in dreary winters
Finnegan, thank you!! I will repeat your kind words often as a means of combatting my latest case of crushing self-doubt.
Hi Finnegan, thanks, my daughter took that picture of me, at the coffee shop. I guess I kind of like it too. Anyway, I was tired of my other photo, ha. Happy 2010!
Thanks for your very kind comments about my DB story!
Thanks for the welcome, Finnegan. Good spotting on my name! You know your strings of consonants. I look forward to reading your work.
Personal comedic genius? If the situation’s open, I’ll take the job! Thank you.
As to the accent, living with Dutchies in Spain, stretching my vowels in Austria, then emigrating to the land of a million pronunciations (none of them correct), the Queen moved out of my English in high dudgeon.
“What’s wrong with your voice?” demanded my imperious mother.
“Nothing mum.”
(Indignantly.) “You’re speaking like an American!”
What with that and a growing tendency to show emotion they’ll probably confiscate my British passport!
lol, thanx finn! this site has so many things to discover i just dont have the time, im doing all this at work! im glad to know there are workshops, ill have to check it out!
Hey, Finny! Thanks for supporting me in my brave but perhaps misguided decision to read my own work on video! My friends are rolling around on the floor clutching their stomachs in laugher, but I do not care! The poem is actually what I consider my best work - I don’t quote any others line-by-line to myself. It is the fate of writers to be misunderstood, nicht wahr? You can get up from the floor now.
Finnegan, thanx for your feedback and Im also open to criticism. I keep thinking I should be getting some of that too, it would be more real, you know? Although the good comments are definitely so encouraging! thanx again!
I appreciate the comment about the Metazen piece, Finnegan. Thanks.
Thanks for the shout about my reading on youtube, Finnegan! And Dylan Thomas was my favorite, my starting point!
thanx Finn!! i didnt even realize there WAS a wall! I posted another story called “breathing”. It would be nice to get feedback from people, even negative feedback would be better than nothing
Hi Finnegan, Thanks for checking out my profile. I don’t really think I’d fit in with the Second Tongue group, but thanks for asking.
“or did you auto-da-fé already?” I tend to, not wanting to be permanently “published” here. I’m still striving for print/reprint with a lot of these.
Hey Finnegan,
I am now of the ilk of two tongues. But I feel pressure. Lots of it.
I will try to write so long as your couch is willing to listen but I fear that these various media are going to make my neuroses become neurotic in their own right. But that may be a good thing. More stories.
Thanks, Finnegan! And for the nice note on Basics.
Hi Finnegan,
Thanks so much for your great comments on “Waiting for the Light” in The Hidden Workshop! They were very helpful!
Kim
Hello Mr. Finnegan. My apologies for being slow to respond. I have been working on my shorts for the past week and haven’t been keeping tabs on the Fictionaut Traffic. Thank you for all your support and encouragement.
finn, thanks for your good wishes about ZOO. i sent you a link, i hope it works. i would LLLLOVEEEE it if you would read Mother Tongue for me!!!! WOW!!! now THERE’s a voice that should read that poem. i’m sure it will be a hit with your Metazen fan club too ;-)
Thank you for the kind words, Finnegan. That was nice.
Thanks for the kind comment, Finnegan!
Hi Finnegan,
Thanks for prompt to the ‘second tongue’ group. I shall take a look.
Kate
Hi Finnegan,
Thanks for the welcome to Second Tongue. I hope to spend more time there soon. At the moment I am kind of overloaded with stuff to do. I like the Vonnegut quote at the top of your site. This is what I need to do today. But away from the computer. (I have a bit of info fatigue.) So on that note…. I’ll drop by again soon I hope!
You have a wall too! Thought it was just me :)
finnie, I don’t know who the man or the woman is, but it’s a fine photograph ain’t it?
Finnegan: Thanks for the wall post and the comment on Ikea People. It’s one of those pieces that worked from the beginning. Barely any revising or rethinking. I wish that happened more often! Good to meet you on here.
I’ve really got to figure out a way to get people to try writing in hyperfiction without necessarily having to get the software like I use (Eastgate’s Tinderbox or their Storyspace) which makes the mapping a fun way to write and automatically exports templates into html ready for uploading. If you saw some of my work you might’ve caught some with the inclusion of images though the 100 Days Project pieces were simple with only color changes in the css because I did a story a day. Let me figure out how I can get you started; Scott Garson might be of help here…
uhh you should submit WHY I WRITE as a publication for fourpaperletters.
You’re a sweetheart, Finny (my pet name for you now)and I appreciate all the support you’ve given me here and made me feel a part of it all. I think my own background as an editor and publisher is what makes me supportive of other writers and want to cheer them on. Your own insight and close reading of the work posted here is a delight to see and has often made me take a second look at stories in which I’ve missed that gem.
Hi Finnegan, thanks for the wall post a few days ago…I forgot to respond. Good luck w/ final day of nano and great to see you on here.
SO great to see your comments to “Quiet” - what a charge. Indeed, yes, I am trying to work parts of this story into the novel. Thanks again, my friend. D
Thanks for the greeting, Finnegan (and here I thought that was your real name!). I see from our profile pics that, in addition to a mutual appreciation for science fiction, we are also fellow fans of Dead White Men from the 18th century.
Finnegan:
Thank you so much for your warmest of welcomes, and I would like to say that I am very glad that we were able to meet during my former days at Twitter. Knowing you and the esteemed MR>H has been a very inspiring association to two very brilliant writers.
I am glad to be here at Fictionaut, and I am looking forward to learning from the many other inspired writers here as well. Can never have ‘too much’ inspiration.
hi nora! you are very kind and the pleasure of commenting was all mine. also, you are the first person to write on my (so far) virginal wall…thanks for that, too. you have a very interesting life and i am thrilled for your success - on and off this noble platform. berlin is a blast, you’re right!
hi finnegan! thanks for the comments you made about my story “EGG”. they were very perceptive. i see you live in berlin?? it’s one of my favourite cities in the world… “i am likely to visit you in your sleep”.. that’s funny ;)