No prob! I actually felt bad writing anything remotely ‘negative’ because everyone else’s comments were so happy…he he. I really love the feel of that story. I just thought after awhile it seemed to be going back to the same kind of thing. That’s all. But I’ve been thinking so singly on 1000 words or less stories that ALL of my longer stories seem in need of a shave. :-)
Hi Heather! Thanks for your kind comments re Crazy Broad. I’m heading for L.A. tomorrow and have no time to devote to providing feedback on stories on this site till… maybe May. But I’ll be back, and I hope as helpful as our mutual friend, James Robison.
Thank you for your comment and I’m glad you tagged the fact that in a story without drama there had to be a kind of argument between high diction and low diction and between the locutionary and perlocutionary— at least to the degree that I understand those terms.
You, my darling are both and angel and a goddess. I, sadly, am a screenwriting troll who is plotting out a kids-time travel script I’m hot to get too. Much, much love to you my dear friend.
Lady Fowler! So glad to be here with you, another sand box; this one full of clean white sand (though now that the gang is here it will soon have lolipop wrappers, cigarette butts and broken glass from the bottle of JD that Verless and I were pulling off). I’m happy to have a new way to see your work.
Hey Jolie You!
Thank you very much for your comment. So glad you liked Charlotte. :) xoxoxo
Heather, Heather, Heather.
Hi Heather. I’m in San Diego also, so I just thought I’d say hi. Look forward to reading your stories.
Thanks, H! You’re such a doll. Hugs, Cynthia
Heather, it’s great to have you with us over at the Prick of the Spindle group!
Thanks to our mutual friend Richard, I can now swap creative distractions with you here. Looking forward to reading around your page. XO
no problem, it was a very fun story! i’m happy to be connecting with all you wonderful writers here!
no problem, it was a very fun story! i’m happy to be connecting with all you wonderful writers here!
no problem, it was a very fun story! i’m happy to be connecting with all you wonderful writers here!
Howdy, Heather!
How are you? I just made a jmww group—please upload “If I Kiss That Girl” if you’d like!
Take care,
Jen
hiii heather!!!! how is everything? yes, i know, i realized you hollered three years later, haha.
No prob! I actually felt bad writing anything remotely ‘negative’ because everyone else’s comments were so happy…he he. I really love the feel of that story. I just thought after awhile it seemed to be going back to the same kind of thing. That’s all. But I’ve been thinking so singly on 1000 words or less stories that ALL of my longer stories seem in need of a shave. :-)
Backatcha beauty! Great reads as always. -_-
You are so welcome, Heather, a pleasure.
All best,
Ethel.
I’m late to say CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yes, heather, you too! i need to be here more often… obviously. -s
Hi Heather! Thanks for your kind comments re Crazy Broad. I’m heading for L.A. tomorrow and have no time to devote to providing feedback on stories on this site till… maybe May. But I’ll be back, and I hope as helpful as our mutual friend, James Robison.
i know — that lap thing was getting out of control! you can be at the front of the line. :-)
you, too, are a hep cat! i’m a night owl — call anytime! xoxo, L
I like your new pict!
thanks for the nice comment on my story and for all the good advice. you are a fabulous writer and reader, and will always have a fan in me!
Thank you for your comment and I’m glad you tagged the fact that in a story without drama there had to be a kind of argument between high diction and low diction and between the locutionary and perlocutionary— at least to the degree that I understand those terms.
Thanks for the note. I’m a fellow Hollins grad, although in 1984 it was still Hollins College.
thanks!!
Hi, Heather!
You, my darling are both and angel and a goddess. I, sadly, am a screenwriting troll who is plotting out a kids-time travel script I’m hot to get too. Much, much love to you my dear friend.
Thanks you for the invite, Heather Goddess of Words.
hi heather- this place is huge! arhhhhhh, falling down the story hole :)
Lady Fowler! So glad to be here with you, another sand box; this one full of clean white sand (though now that the gang is here it will soon have lolipop wrappers, cigarette butts and broken glass from the bottle of JD that Verless and I were pulling off). I’m happy to have a new way to see your work.
okay i’m here damn it ;-)
big thanks for the invite!!!
as soon as I find some spare time…
it looks interesting – and hoping loads of people dig your work!!! (of course, they will do when they read it!!!)
Hi Heather—just saying hello and that I am a fan of your work which I consider to be amazing.
Hi Heather! Looking forward to checking out your work.
Hola, amiga!
Hi Heather. You too!
yay — you’re here! i hope you like it and get a lot out of it. looking forward to checking out some of your stuff!