Matthew - Thanks for the push on Build a Fire. I submitted it to a webzine I've never been able to crack; your suggestion made it happen. Now we wait... LS
Matthew I'm glad you liked my story Um-hm, and it's nice to know we got you back here in the states. Now we just need Mavi here, too, and all will be well.
Hi Matthew, thank you so much for your nice words on Unpacking Sentences! I appreciate your reading it, and I think I have some of your work to catch up on as well!
One of the things that struck me about Whitechapel is that it's historical fiction. It made me think about how almost everything on Fictionaut and in the literary journals is set in the present day or within the writer's lifetime. You put in extra effort. Bravo.
Of course, Matthew. It was a very important piece to write.
RE: Novel ~ Top Secret stuff right now. I will say that two of the characters are forever striving, in different ways, and are never satisfied.
I look forward to reading more of your work. Warmly, Jen
Matthew: Thank you for reading shades of miss zorita and the compliment. You have an interesting profile/history. My mfa combined a study of Catholic aesthetics along with the a helping of the traditional western literary canon. Your mention of having been a Benedictine monk made me think of this. Have you read J.F. Powers? The late short story writer of midwestern Catholic priests? He is one of my favorite short story writers, ever, bar nun. In fact, it's time for a re-reading, I think. OK, well, just thought I'd inquire. Good luck with your tour in the peace corp and with your literary undertakings. -- Q
hey matthew.
i'm glad you commented on my story. Gave me the opportunity to come to your page and learn about you. Fairfield? I'm about to start an MFA at Antioch. Hope your program goes well. About my story.....you found it creepy. I can see why you'd say that. I think of it as a love story. It's a post-holocaust story that i based on my friend's parents. They actually met when she was his nurse in a hospital after the war (he'd been in the camps) and he weighed sixty pounds.
thanks again for reading my story and for taking the time to comment.
Hey Matt, loved your story. The story I got pubbed in the October 2008 SUN in the Readers Write column. Not really a story but an essay about finding out that a blighted ovum really wasn't and was, in fact, my son. After years of medical treatment for infertility. They edited the hell out of that piece. I'll have to dig it up and send it your way.
Readers Write is competitive but a legitimate cred, so look at each issue's prompts and send in your essay. You have such a world of experience I am sure what you wrote would resonate.
And yes, The SUN is out of my alma mater Chapel Hill, though not affiliated with the University. Peace...
Matthew, glad you got a laugh off my vagina girl story (centerpiece). sorry i can't divulge the actress name-- life in the theatre has a lot of odd bits and pieces, but one never divulges...
you will just have to think and wonder, ha ha!
Thanks for liking and commenting on "Bone Density," Matthew. The lines you like are plays on lines from Melville's "Bartleby the Scrivener": Ah, Bartleby! Ah, Humanity!" Not that that helps explain anything!!!!
Matt, always in awe of how your experiences comingle in your writing. Thanks for the kind words at 52/250. I post there -- and here -- at the same time, usually Thursday night. I appreciate your reads whenever and wherever you find them. peace...
Matthew, Thanks for your comment on The '08 Campaign. Very happy you liked it. Re Michael Moore, I think he's addicted to Lesser Evil politics. Of course, Obama's the Major Evil in Afghanistan now but, what the hell, huh?
Matt. You rewrote your profile. In the new one I discover you ar a product of the Benedictines as am I, St Anselm College. They took a lot and gave a lot. They're right up there with General Electric in shaping who I am today. Cheers. LS
Matthew, thanks for your congrats on my story Bottom. I'm not exactly an overnight success, though, I've been writing steady about 15 yrs. (I should be doing even better, right!) ha ha
Matthew, thanks for the explanation about bladderwort. I was going to look it up, then got sidetracked. So glad it was surface, not service, cause I thought I was really missing something!
Thanks for reading & commenting on Flesh & Blood! Coq au vin is a French stew made with chicken (usually legs) and a lot of red wine. If made well it's delicious!
Matthew, I did so much appreciate the fave and the comments on "The man who killed Molly Bloom." Sometimes I never know how these short pieces will be received, so I welcome the response.
Thank you for taking time to read Prologue and for responding favorably. I used to be able to keep up with the writers on Fnaut, but too many join every day. Not complaining. Good for all of us. But I think I've missed your stuff. We'll see.
Matthew,
You can find all the chapters of my novel The Great San Francisco Poetry Wars posted under the Novel Excerpts group.
But also let me know if you want me to send a copy to your email. I can do that too.
Jerry
Oh and: of course that was my reaction to your Union of Opposites story -- just went and read it again, this time remembered to FAVE it. Good lord, man, that is some tale.
Ah, yes, Matthew, that is the German historian in me, sometimes still dying to get out. I really like this piece, think it could be even bigger -- though I like the idea of covering 12 years of German history in 250 words or less (you've taken the challenge to new degrees here). Mostly, I think creating a character who is a type, a metaphor, or an idea is intriguing. Also, have you read Christopher Browning's Ordinary Men? one of my personal favorites concerning this period of German history...
Don't think I thanked you for your comment on and fav of "Pain." I was out of town (in North Carolina!) conducting a workshop on online teaching. Thank you, Matthew!
If I missed responding to any of your other comments on my work, I'm thanking you now. I very much appreciate your thoughtful and kind reading of my work!
No problem, glad I found it! I will check out more of your work soon. That’s so great you’re in the Peace Corps. My brother-in-law is in the Peace Corps too, in Indonesia. Good stuff. I can only imagine how much writing inspiration you must find over there.
Matthew, thanks for your comments on Leached. I don't have a lot of work that conforms to the NC concept, so I figure poems are pretty universal and will work for NC Group
Hi Matthew, thanks for your comments about Double Barrel. As ever, I appreciate your insights. No immediate plan to expand this short short, but I am forever subtly weaving a gun or war themes into my tales. Have a great day!
Thank you, Matthew, for reading my story 'Pale Heart'. It means a lot to a Hong Kong writer in English like me (I'm pretty isolated where I am).
I enjoyed your poems and short prose too. You have a very natural relationship with your subjects. You observation carries a gentle sense of lightness but then it has weight.
hi matthew...thanks for reading Wild Blue Yonder...appreciate it. So i see you're heading to Fairfield U. I grew up next town over...great location for a writer...you've got New York little more than an hour train ride and up the other way New Haven has Long Wharf and Yale Rep, etc.
Matthew, thank you so much for reading An Italian Lunch (II) (and An Italian Lunch) and for the fav. I, too, this this particular version (II) is tighter, though it's actually about 400 words longer than the original posted. Since posting II, I have made additional revisions to it (not updated here) as the work on the overall piece progresses. At this time I don't plan on posting more, working hard at moving it all forward. But in the June issue of Women Writers: A Zine, a version of Chapter 1, titled The First Olive, as well as this version of An Italian Lunch (II), just titled for publication An Italian Lunch, will be published, if you're interested in reading. I am not sure of the actual publication date, but think it's sometime in the latter part of June.
Hi Matthew, thank you for reading "Map to the Heart" and for your helpful comment --- I'm thinking I might use these characters in a longer piece. (It is fun to write within the 250-word restriction though!)
In reply to your question, the Korean War was over when I joined the navy in '57 but the ship I served aboard, the USS Eversole (DD789) received seven battle stars for Korean War service. The story I wrote actually happened but I learned about it from old timers who were still aboard when I arrived. I got out in '61. The Eversole was transferred to the Turkish Navy in '73. It's now a museum ship in Izmit, Turkey.
Thanks, Mattthew for your comments on Weakest Link. It was a case of writing and posting too quickly. I usually work on my poems for months, sometimes even years (on and off). I am not really happy with the ending of this poem, a bit too abrupt it does feel like it should go on.
Thanks, again :-)
thanks for the comment on Rock On, Matthew. Glad you liked it. Now my turn to read some more Hamilton... (been a crazy week, just getting here for the first time since... well it's been a while!)
Thank you for reading and commenting on TWO FOR THE ROAD; I appreciate it. I've never posted like this, but apparently, it's the way it's done on Fictionaught. I usually just recip -- this seems like Advertisements For Myself.
Matthew, thanks so much for your nice comment about Flatfish. The sentence you mentioned is the core of the piece, and I'm glad it stood out for you. Appreciated!
Thank you Matthew, for the encouragement on my story Bookmark, but neither Opium or Six Sentences will accept previously published work. That's the downside of posting stories online. I have another piece going up at six sentences on Friday May 28th and I might write something for Opium as well, although I'm not a fan of entry fees.
Matt, thanks so much for your comment on Survivor. It means a lot to me. And hey -- we're in 6sv3 together! Though I've yet to buy mine yet -- this month's been insane. I'll look for yours when I order this weekend. Peace...
Haiku II is only my second haiku since grade school. It's such an interesting form of writing. Usually I write free verse, but I'm fascinated by poetry forms. Thanks for the comment.
Thanks for your comments on Eli. On an unrelated subject. A while ago I had the impropriety to suggest you illustrate your own Turkey story. You'll be amused that I finally found an illustrator for the Illustra-Novella I am working on. Turns out she's thirteen. I need a chaperone to review materials with her. Perhaps there are lights at the end of our tunnels.
Thanks for the invite to North Carolina writers. I'm from Chattanooga, but i hear Tennessee used to part of North Carolina...or was it the other way around? I should know that.
Hemingways shorts aren't half bad. I like them more than his novels. Also like Saramago, but i've only read a slightly lesser known book of his called "The Year of the Death of Ricardo Reis." I liked it.
Thanks for inviting me to join North Carolina writers. I'm originally from Pennsylvania, spent my summers in Maryland, and currently live in Illinois. I have a good friend in Greensboro. In fact, I'll be visiting her in two weeks. North Carolina is a beautiful state!
Matthew! Thanks for reading and commenting on Celebrating Difference. No, they do not catch sea turtles any more. There are not enough around; we went to an island famous for its "turtle calling" and they never came. Frisbie's time was long ago...
Matt, thanks for comment on 'Quince Orchard'. Adam & Eve didn't even occur to me as I started it, was just a combo of 2 experiences, but obviously the theme of the myth came and stayed in the mind as I wrote, guess the serpant is the other guy? or maybe that darn cat. Or one of the sisters at the Cloisters. And I did role reversal I guess, me being the thief and offering, then I am banished to a life of no guitar and books. Nice to know one can be clever when not trying.
Thanks, Matthew, I can see why you thought it was two stories. I've clarified the first part by adding "Lantana Prison" after "I visit on the inside" less ambiguous. Really appreciate your observations.
Matthew,
Your idea, your execution, your piece. Editing is mostly taking out. Much easier than putting in in the first place! All the kudos go to you.
Thanks for inviting me to Fictionaut. Enjoying the communal spirit very much.
Hi Matt. I've been teaching as a graduate instructor -- everyone in the program does so in his/her second year. Graduating later this month; I'll probably be an adjunct next year... Good luck with your MFA.
Matthew, Thanks for your comments. I'm flattered. I have several self-published books in print. They are available at Lulu. Check them out. Hello Walls is a collection. Tiny Bubbles is a group of more recent stories and has a great cover! Check it out; you'll like it.
Apologies that it's taken me two days to respond (I missed your comment), but thank you for the really nice words about Things I Should Have Done #2. How did it inspire you?
Take a look at our up coming themes for inspiration. We're really looking something outside the lines. So let your imagination spread beyond the obvious applications of the themes and surprise us. I'd love to send you an acceptance.
I am part Cherokee, Matthew - my Father's side... My great-great-great grandmother was Cherokee, and a prisoner on the Trail of Tears, but escaped - or I wouldn't be typing this note.
Thanks for the read. I was considering just stopping where I am in it, but I do so want to get to her apartment, have the detectives make their analysis, get to what happens to her and by who and why!
I had responded to your post, and hadn't realized I ought to be responding on your wall. Thanks again!
the hairdresser prompt was on the yAWP group room, and really it was a random prompt story from Stephan Anstay, not a formal prmopt. But is used it as such. I feel that any creative work that comes out of the yAWP room can be tagged as such here, and I have a loose definition to some degree. Everything is moving to the Group page... the contests, etc.
Hi Matthew, nice to hear from you. I'm about two hours away from Charlotte, in the mountains near Asheville (a town where a naked man ran for mayor not long ago and the city administration building looks like a wedding cake). I haven't made the journey to Charlotte yet, but I look forward to it, and I look forward to reading more of your work, which I'm quite enjoying, by the way.
Well Matthew....I printed off 'The Land of Four Rivers' but for the life of me cannot locate the other poem you had posted yesterday???? Also I cannot find the text of my e-mails to you???? Oh and belated Happy Birthday to you too and imagine you are speaking to a Joe Sullivan right now. Must be Irish. In gaelic his surname means " from one-eye" - "o suil abhain" --- tell him that. Must check out his stuff also.
No, not me, but my grandfather did with his brothers. I think he spoke Armenian, not Tagalog. My mom called it a language that was very guttural, with words that were sort of stuck in the throat. I've never heard it.
Thanks for the great comment, and happy birthday belatedly. You've got the same birthday as my dad. And my wife was born in Subic Bay. And my grandfather was Armenian. No joke.
Thanks Matt on 'Driven/Eyes' - spiders might top the list of pests. Miami we had palmettos, one flew up my t shirt once - harmless but unsettling. NY roaches do it by massive numbers and agility & quickness to flee.
Thanks for reading "Getting Religion." I suppose I could try writing my novel 140 characters at a time . . . but I think I'd lose the continuity (or the continuity I hope for).
Matthew, thanks for your comments about "Snowed In." Indeed, Hemingway (and the Lish edited Carver) were on my mind when I wrote this. I would say I was "under the influence" of both, but I don't like the sound of that.
An old Kentucky boy. I did not know that, Matthew. How did I miss such an important fact in your bio? Damn me. Just damn me. Kentucky...hard as a coffin nail and everything born it. You know what I'm saying. We have no other choice.
Wow! Thanks. I enjoyed your piece about the Welsh wedding as well. If that's your voice on the recorded version, that rocks, too. You sound like one of my former college professors. I'm having my fiance come over later to listen to it.
welcome matthew! i liked 'mickey'...if you get the hand of the "challenges" and feel silly enough, you need to consider kevin myrick's april's fool challenge...and 'street traveler' is good stuff, btw. cheerio!
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Matthew, thanks for commenting on "The Hotel Where Esenin Hanged Himself."
Thanks for your comments on 'Aftermath' & 'One For Me And One For Jerry Lee. I appreciate the input.
Thanks for the * for "Flying Tiger," young man. It was before your time, but for me it was an unforgettable experience.
hi matt, thanks for your comment on "The Sodomized Dictator"!
Hi Matthew: Glad to have you back. Thank you for your response to "2008..." Best.
hey matt, novel's good. slow work. how's the MFA!?
Thanks for faving "Satan and the Moon."
Thanks for commenting on the Euclid poem, Matthew.
Thanks for reading and commenting on "Black Ice," Matthew.
Matthew - thanks for reading Burn Baby Burn.
Matthew, thanks for reading and commenting on Hidden Reminders. I really appreciate the time you took for both. fos.
Matthew, thanks for commenting on Myrtle Beach Daze.
Thanks for commenting on "The Lost Boys," Matthew. Appreciate your reading very much.
Matt, thanks for your consistent reading of my work and I'm glad you thought A Backpack of Anger was worth reading.
Hi Matt, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my bus driver story, I really appreciate it. fos.
Thanks, Matthew, for your comment & * for "Ants." Thanks for your endorsement of Clorox Cleanup, too.
Matthew, great to hear from you (via your post re: my story "Reverie.")...what are you up to these days?
Thanks for reading, Matthew!
Matthew, glad you liked "Springtime." Thanks.
Matthew, thanks for the fave and the comment on The Rising.
Thanks, Matthew. Glad you liked "Addictions."
Matthew, thanks for stopping by to read my recent story, "Loneliness," and taking time to comment. I really appreciate it!
Thank you for your support, Matthew. "Men Are Beasts" was fun to write.
Thanks for commenting on "Son of Goya," Matthew. Appreciate it.
comment, not coment ...yikes.
Matthew, thanks for the read and the coment on "She said."
Thanks for your comment about Sex Ed With Barbie and GIJoe. That's the name of the chapter, not the novel, by the way.
Matthew - thanks reading and commenting on "Health Code". Appreciated.
Thanks for the comment on "Staring at Waves," Matthew.
Matthew, No the story was not sent to a newspaper. I forget whether it was published elsewhere or not. Thanks for the comment on "War."
Matthew,
Thanks for commenting on "Sermon of Lilacs."
Matthew - Thanks for the push on Build a Fire. I submitted it to a webzine I've never been able to crack; your suggestion made it happen. Now we wait... LS
Hi, Matthew. Thanks for reading 'Stupiditās.' Your comment and fav are greatly appreciated.
Thank you, Matthew, for commenting on "Wahrheit und Dichtung." Enjoyed your poems in Istanbul Literary Review. Congratulations!
Matthew, thanks for the thumbs up for "Madness."
Thanks for faving, "George," Matthew. Always appreciate your stopping by.
Matthew thanks a lot for "east to west" and hope you are doing well, drop me a line and let me know what's happening, etc.
Sharp eye, Matthew. Yes, I left an article out. (It's fixed now.) Thanks! Thanks for the read and the fav, too!
MAtthew - thanks for the comment on "I Like It". Very appreciated.
Matthew, thanks for reading and commenting on "Great Moments in Blindness."
What is it with you guys & undercooked lamb? It was awful!
Matthew, appreciate your read and comments on "body" and wishing you lots of good luck in the coming year! susan
Thanks for the * Matthew. Hey. Are you back in the US of A?
Matthew, thank you. Have you started your program yet?
Matthew, thanks so much for reading and liking "oasis" I appreciate!
Thanks for reading, Matthew.
Thanks for fave of "The Proud Accounting," Mathew. Glad you liked it.
Matthew, thanks for letting Gin And A Cowboy simmer in your head. I've done a further revision since you read it.
Matthew I'm glad you liked my story Um-hm, and it's nice to know we got you back here in the states. Now we just need Mavi here, too, and all will be well.
Thanks for commenting on and faving "Dad and the Red Light." Appreciate it, Matthew!
Thanks Matt! Appreciate you reading "Lay on Me"
Matthew, thanks for "rug" glad you liked it. Are you back in the states yet? Have a happy Thanksgiving with your lovely new bride
I'm glad you liked my dog is, Matthew. Thank you for your kind remarks. Have a good week. -- Q
Thanks for the fave of "Raw Salt." Appreciate it! Glad you liked the poem.
Thanks, Matthew. Yes, lots going on in the third paragraph.
Hi Matthew! Thanks so much for your comments and fave of "Cadaver Chris." I appreciate it.
Thanks for the comment on "I Am Not a Corpse," Matthew.
Matthew, really appreciate your reading my story "Moro" and commenting on it. Thanks very much.
Thanks so much for visited and commenting on Pocahontas poem--your presence is always appreciated.
Hi Matthew, thank you so much for your nice words on Unpacking Sentences! I appreciate your reading it, and I think I have some of your work to catch up on as well!
Thank you Matthew for the comment on Two Trees. Good to see you here -- as always.
One of the things that struck me about Whitechapel is that it's historical fiction. It made me think about how almost everything on Fictionaut and in the literary journals is set in the present day or within the writer's lifetime. You put in extra effort. Bravo.
Hi. Matthew. Thanks for reading and faving 'Fifty Five Words or Less.'
Glad you liked "Floris Psychosis," Matthew. Thanks for commenting.
(if i talk too much about a work-in-progress it breaks the spell, so to speak)
Of course, Matthew. It was a very important piece to write.
RE: Novel ~ Top Secret stuff right now. I will say that two of the characters are forever striving, in different ways, and are never satisfied.
I look forward to reading more of your work. Warmly, Jen
thanks for the read on Olde Burying Yard...the tombstone poem, is i admit actually carved in stone, somewhere, and not from my own hand :)
Matthew, thanks for reading and faving "The Party." Hope all's well with you these days.
Matthew, my man! Thank you for the comment on "Vestiges." I want to print your comment out and frame it. Thanks, you rock!
Thanks, Matthew. Glad you like this new kick I'm on. Party on.
uggh: "bar nun" - I am semi-literate.
Matthew: Thank you for reading shades of miss zorita and the compliment. You have an interesting profile/history. My mfa combined a study of Catholic aesthetics along with the a helping of the traditional western literary canon. Your mention of having been a Benedictine monk made me think of this. Have you read J.F. Powers? The late short story writer of midwestern Catholic priests? He is one of my favorite short story writers, ever, bar nun. In fact, it's time for a re-reading, I think. OK, well, just thought I'd inquire. Good luck with your tour in the peace corp and with your literary undertakings. -- Q
Matthew, thanks for your comments on Check Engine, & for joining the Ramshackle group. All best.
Thanks very much for the great comment and the fave on 4P28! Glad you liked the Tet line. Which is harder to survive, eh?
re: Orange Julius poem.
"Should it be 'self improvement?'"
It should if it didn't want to be a pun, but it does.
Lots of the weirder phrases/ideas in the poem are puns: Ecuadorian gray, chicken a la Siegfried, playing catch with the throw rugs, etc.
The "skittish horse wearing an iron hat" comes from Temple Grandin's life-changing book Animals in Translation.
Thanks for asking, Matthew! And thanks for commenting.
Hey there, Matthew. Thanks for likin and commenting on "the loudest loud". Cheers...
hey matthew.
i'm glad you commented on my story. Gave me the opportunity to come to your page and learn about you. Fairfield? I'm about to start an MFA at Antioch. Hope your program goes well. About my story.....you found it creepy. I can see why you'd say that. I think of it as a love story. It's a post-holocaust story that i based on my friend's parents. They actually met when she was his nurse in a hospital after the war (he'd been in the camps) and he weighed sixty pounds.
thanks again for reading my story and for taking the time to comment.
Hey Matthew, thanks for your comments on Cheap Thrills. fos.
Happy you liked my post 9/11 story, young man. Yup. Can't help it that cats scratch their way into my stories; we've got nine of them.
Matthew, thanks for your kind words on The House Sitter. And yes, Slush Pile's a great mag. Submit, submit!
Hey Matt, loved your story. The story I got pubbed in the October 2008 SUN in the Readers Write column. Not really a story but an essay about finding out that a blighted ovum really wasn't and was, in fact, my son. After years of medical treatment for infertility. They edited the hell out of that piece. I'll have to dig it up and send it your way.
Readers Write is competitive but a legitimate cred, so look at each issue's prompts and send in your essay. You have such a world of experience I am sure what you wrote would resonate.
And yes, The SUN is out of my alma mater Chapel Hill, though not affiliated with the University. Peace...
Thanks for commenting on "Son of Uncle Sam." Glad you liked it.
True story!
Thanks, Matt!
Thanks for welcoming me here, Matthew!
Matthew, glad you got a laugh off my vagina girl story (centerpiece). sorry i can't divulge the actress name-- life in the theatre has a lot of odd bits and pieces, but one never divulges...
you will just have to think and wonder, ha ha!
Matthew, thanks so much for your lovely comment and fave on Anything Again. I'm really pleased you like this one, it's quite an unusual style for me.
Matt, thanks for catching the typo on my story about the weird shrink.
Thanks for the kind words and the fave on No Goodbyes, Mathew! I really appreciate it.
Hi, Matthew. Thanks for reading 'Number Nine.' I appreciate your comment and I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for reading and commenting on Telephone, Matthew! I appreciate the read.
Thanks for liking and commenting on "Bone Density," Matthew. The lines you like are plays on lines from Melville's "Bartleby the Scrivener": Ah, Bartleby! Ah, Humanity!" Not that that helps explain anything!!!!
In Secrets of the Dead, should the line read, "this is where they stored their power"? (A horrific event in history)
Thanks so much for kind words on Responsible! I always appreciate your thoughts.
Matt, always in awe of how your experiences comingle in your writing. Thanks for the kind words at 52/250. I post there -- and here -- at the same time, usually Thursday night. I appreciate your reads whenever and wherever you find them. peace...
thanks, Matthew, for your comment on Time to Rest. Much appreciated, as always!
Matthew, Thanks for your comment on The '08 Campaign. Very happy you liked it. Re Michael Moore, I think he's addicted to Lesser Evil politics. Of course, Obama's the Major Evil in Afghanistan now but, what the hell, huh?
Matt. You rewrote your profile. In the new one I discover you ar a product of the Benedictines as am I, St Anselm College. They took a lot and gave a lot. They're right up there with General Electric in shaping who I am today. Cheers. LS
"Like the line, 'Is there a recipe for lasting happiness?'"
Thanks!
It's a serious question!
Thanks for posting on my story, "Trangression", Matthew. I appreciate the feedback tremendously.
Matthew, thanks for your congrats on my story Bottom. I'm not exactly an overnight success, though, I've been writing steady about 15 yrs. (I should be doing even better, right!) ha ha
Hey Matt, Thx for reading and enjoying my noir piece.
Thanks for reading "The Corners," Matthew. A couple of editors suggested I cut that last line. Couldn't do it.
THanks for the comment on Between, Matthew! that was a fun one...
Thanks for commenting on "Self Alaska." I always appreciate your comments, Matthew.
Thanks for the kind words and the fave on Corner! I appreciate the read.
Matthew, thanks for reading 'Bud Business? Booming!' I appreciate your comment and fav.
"It's like like having my own editor."
Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
hey matt, i feel like your piece "dream catcher" could be an awesome classic rock song
Thanks for the kind words and the fave on Limboland! So glad you liked it.
Matthew, thanks for the explanation about bladderwort. I was going to look it up, then got sidetracked. So glad it was surface, not service, cause I thought I was really missing something!
Hi Matthew, thanks for your comments on the "Godot" stories.
Hi, Matthew, thanks for reading Halfway to the Top. I appreciate your comment and fav.
You made my day! It's my first 10*, thank you!
Thanks for the kind words on "Midnight Riders." I appreciate the read.
Matthew, thanks for your comment on "After the Shark." Have to say, this experience was way, way, way before Jaws. Maybe 1962.
Hi, Matthew. Thanks for reading Privite Security. I appreciate your comments and helpful suggestions.
You are right about drinking and forgetting, Matthew. Of course we don't know that from personal experiece, do we? Thanks for the read!
Congrats on the 10+!
Matthew, I'm glad you saw Organic BJ's in terms of love, thanks for reading
Basically, the essential info about Richard Dadd is in the three-sentence found poem you so kindly commented on. You now know as much about him as I do! But check out the picture online: http://www.tate.org.uk/servlet/ViewWork?workid=2979&tabview=image
It's a little hard to make out all the details, but the painting (only 26.4" x 20.7") is amazingly detailed.
Thanks for reading & commenting on Flesh & Blood! Coq au vin is a French stew made with chicken (usually legs) and a lot of red wine. If made well it's delicious!
Matthew, I did so much appreciate the fave and the comments on "The man who killed Molly Bloom." Sometimes I never know how these short pieces will be received, so I welcome the response.
Thank you for taking time to read Prologue and for responding favorably. I used to be able to keep up with the writers on Fnaut, but too many join every day. Not complaining. Good for all of us. But I think I've missed your stuff. We'll see.
Matthew,
You can find all the chapters of my novel The Great San Francisco Poetry Wars posted under the Novel Excerpts group.
But also let me know if you want me to send a copy to your email. I can do that too.
Jerry
Oh and: of course that was my reaction to your Union of Opposites story -- just went and read it again, this time remembered to FAVE it. Good lord, man, that is some tale.
Thanks Matthew for the comment on French Kiss. I knew there would be folks like me who relate to that line about Tom Waits and Madonna!
Glad you liked "Processes." Thanks for commenting. Stanza two always got a laugh whenever I read it in public.
thanks, Matthew, for your comment on Bedtime Story. I appreciate that you like that line. Much appreciated.
Ah, yes, Matthew, that is the German historian in me, sometimes still dying to get out. I really like this piece, think it could be even bigger -- though I like the idea of covering 12 years of German history in 250 words or less (you've taken the challenge to new degrees here). Mostly, I think creating a character who is a type, a metaphor, or an idea is intriguing. Also, have you read Christopher Browning's Ordinary Men? one of my personal favorites concerning this period of German history...
Matthew, Thanks for commenting on "The Sky is Simply White." Always great to hear from you.
Hi Matthew, thanks for reading and commenting. congrats to you, on breadfruit -- so glad that wonderful short found a home.
Hello, Matthew. Thanks for the commentary on Vignette. I look forward to reading your work.
Don't think I thanked you for your comment on and fav of "Pain." I was out of town (in North Carolina!) conducting a workshop on online teaching. Thank you, Matthew!
If I missed responding to any of your other comments on my work, I'm thanking you now. I very much appreciate your thoughtful and kind reading of my work!
Hey-- hope my suggestions weren't too forward. Just throwing my ideas out there... Love your stuff, as always, Matthew.
Thanks for reading and commenting on "The Assassination of Sadat." It's an old poem of mine, but one I still like.
Hi Matthew, Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my story "Thieves!" I really appreciate it.
No problem, glad I found it! I will check out more of your work soon. That’s so great you’re in the Peace Corps. My brother-in-law is in the Peace Corps too, in Indonesia. Good stuff. I can only imagine how much writing inspiration you must find over there.
Thanks for your comment on my Daddy piece. I liked that line to. And it's true.
Thanks for reading Unfit, Matthew, I truly appreciate it.
Matthew - thank you for the comment!
Thanks for reading "Camp 7," Matthew. No, its present tense, and using the adjective form incorrectly is standard practice where I grew up.
Thanks, Matthew, for your read on my story X. Glad you liked it.
Matthew, thanks for your comments on Leached. I don't have a lot of work that conforms to the NC concept, so I figure poems are pretty universal and will work for NC Group
Matthew, glad you like Solitary, thanks for letting me know
cheers!
Hi Matthew, thanks for your comments about Double Barrel. As ever, I appreciate your insights. No immediate plan to expand this short short, but I am forever subtly weaving a gun or war themes into my tales. Have a great day!
Thanks as always for your kind comments, Matt!
Thank you, Matthew, for reading my story 'Pale Heart'. It means a lot to a Hong Kong writer in English like me (I'm pretty isolated where I am).
I enjoyed your poems and short prose too. You have a very natural relationship with your subjects. You observation carries a gentle sense of lightness but then it has weight.
Thanks Matthew. Looking forward to reading your work.
Matthew, thanks for reading and commenting on my Naked through the pines. I'm pleased you liked it, even the bollocks!
Thanks for taking the time to comment on "loose threads". Good luck on the MFA!
hi matthew...thanks for reading Wild Blue Yonder...appreciate it. So i see you're heading to Fairfield U. I grew up next town over...great location for a writer...you've got New York little more than an hour train ride and up the other way New Haven has Long Wharf and Yale Rep, etc.
Matthew, thank you so much for reading An Italian Lunch (II) (and An Italian Lunch) and for the fav. I, too, this this particular version (II) is tighter, though it's actually about 400 words longer than the original posted. Since posting II, I have made additional revisions to it (not updated here) as the work on the overall piece progresses. At this time I don't plan on posting more, working hard at moving it all forward. But in the June issue of Women Writers: A Zine, a version of Chapter 1, titled The First Olive, as well as this version of An Italian Lunch (II), just titled for publication An Italian Lunch, will be published, if you're interested in reading. I am not sure of the actual publication date, but think it's sometime in the latter part of June.
Congrats on your upcoming MFA program!
Thanks for commenting on "Searching for the Word." Glad you liked it!
Hi Matthew, thank you for reading "Map to the Heart" and for your helpful comment --- I'm thinking I might use these characters in a longer piece. (It is fun to write within the 250-word restriction though!)
In reply to your question, the Korean War was over when I joined the navy in '57 but the ship I served aboard, the USS Eversole (DD789) received seven battle stars for Korean War service. The story I wrote actually happened but I learned about it from old timers who were still aboard when I arrived. I got out in '61. The Eversole was transferred to the Turkish Navy in '73. It's now a museum ship in Izmit, Turkey.
Thank you, Matthew! Are you headed back to the States yet - when does your MFA program start?
Thanks for the comment (and the free proofread) on Flashback. Cheers.
Thanks for reading A Kingdom to Awaken, Matthew, and for your suggestion about a children's book.
Thanks, Mattthew for your comments on Weakest Link. It was a case of writing and posting too quickly. I usually work on my poems for months, sometimes even years (on and off). I am not really happy with the ending of this poem, a bit too abrupt it does feel like it should go on.
Thanks, again :-)
thanks for the comment on Rock On, Matthew. Glad you liked it. Now my turn to read some more Hamilton... (been a crazy week, just getting here for the first time since... well it's been a while!)
Matt - thanks for reading Brave New World - flash is new to me, tryin' it on for size.
Matthew, I like when you strip some of the fat off your poems, making them leaner and more direct. With your writing style there's more power that way
Thanks, Matthew. Yes, falling out of bed is no fun. Why do they make bed so far off the ground?!
Matthew, thanks for reading Who Sent You? I don't know that Steven King story but will check it out. He's brilliant but scary...
Matthew, thanks for taking the time to read Dream Girl and for your helpful comment.
Thanks, Matthew, I was hoping you would see this one. All the best to you, M.
Thanks, Matthew, not sure if I'd want one! (electrified dog)
Thank you for reading and commenting on TWO FOR THE ROAD; I appreciate it. I've never posted like this, but apparently, it's the way it's done on Fictionaught. I usually just recip -- this seems like Advertisements For Myself.
Matthew, thanks for reading The Fall of Love. I guess the Sno*Caps are lost/stolen/eaten by now...
Damn!
Matthew! Thanks for reading and commenting on Kamikaze Birdsongs. I look forward to reading more from the NC group.
I hate to say it, but that's my kind of dog!! I have terrible animal allergies. I'd have to learn how to pronounce it first, I reckon.
Just posted my animal story :-)
Matthew -- thanks for the comment on Elephant. Glad you liked it. Happily anticipating your inner animal, too. :)
Thanks for the comment and the fave!
Thanks Matthew, always appreciate your comments!
Thanks, Matthew. In Paris I couldn't even get into my pension unless I asked for my key in French. (And that was about all the French I knew!)
Matthew, thanks for reading Teacher. I'm glad to know you enjoyed it and your comments are always appreciated.
Matthew, thanks so much for your nice comment about Flatfish. The sentence you mentioned is the core of the piece, and I'm glad it stood out for you. Appreciated!
Matthew, thanks for your comment on 'Saturday Morning'. All best.
Matt - yes if I recall, that particular bowl of pasta was very good, served with a side dish of memories
Once again, many thanks, Matthew :-)
Thank you for your submissions to Like Birds Lit! :) I look forward to reading your pieces.
Thank you Matthew, for the encouragement on my story Bookmark, but neither Opium or Six Sentences will accept previously published work. That's the downside of posting stories online. I have another piece going up at six sentences on Friday May 28th and I might write something for Opium as well, although I'm not a fan of entry fees.
Matthew, thanks for commenting on my "The Microseconds" story!
Thank you so much, Matthew for your comments on "Bread, Fish, Serpent, Stone" and "Not Today." Much appreciated!
Matt, thanks so much for your comment on Survivor. It means a lot to me. And hey -- we're in 6sv3 together! Though I've yet to buy mine yet -- this month's been insane. I'll look for yours when I order this weekend. Peace...
Thanks, Matthew. Your positive response to "Mt. Harmonica" means a lot to me.
Glad you liked "Time." Thanks for commenting.
Thanks for reading Empty House. Glad you got something out of it :-)
Thanks, Matthew, for your comment on A Knobby Thing. Are we onto fancy me yet?? This has been fun so far, only 51 to go... :)
Thanks, Matthew, for reading and commenting on Doreen - III.
Haiku II is only my second haiku since grade school. It's such an interesting form of writing. Usually I write free verse, but I'm fascinated by poetry forms. Thanks for the comment.
Thanks, Matthew. Appreciate the comments on "Greyhound."
Thanks Matthew for your comments on "Every time we kiss..."! The maggoty tins come from Battleship Potemkin.
Thanks, Matthew!
Matthew, that's why he is an ex-husband!
bloody iron indeed:-)
Matthew, I 'preciate your reading "Black Orchids," and I bet you pinned a star to it, too. Thanks so much.
Thanks for your comment on "Blossoms and Buds." Glad you liked it.
Thanks for your comments on Eli. On an unrelated subject. A while ago I had the impropriety to suggest you illustrate your own Turkey story. You'll be amused that I finally found an illustrator for the Illustra-Novella I am working on. Turns out she's thirteen. I need a chaperone to review materials with her. Perhaps there are lights at the end of our tunnels.
hey matt. thx for digging my sunday cookout story!
Thanks, Matthew, for reading and commenting on Doreen - II. I'm happy to know you liked it.
Matthew, thank you! Really exciting to see what you're doing - a second tour with the Peace Corps, what's next for you?
Thanks, Matthew!
Thank you, Matthew, for your appreciation of "My Thumbs"!
Hello! Thank you for reading my poetry..I will dive in to yours ASAP. :)
Thanks for your comment on "Raleigh B," Matthew.
Matthew, thank you for your comments on "My Name is Bill Franklin," and as I said on the post - I'm with you on the willow tree switches.
Hi Matthew,
Thanks for the invite to North Carolina writers. I'm from Chattanooga, but i hear Tennessee used to part of North Carolina...or was it the other way around? I should know that.
Hemingways shorts aren't half bad. I like them more than his novels. Also like Saramago, but i've only read a slightly lesser known book of his called "The Year of the Death of Ricardo Reis." I liked it.
Thanks again
Thanks for commenting on my piece, Talking to Flowers, Matthew. Have a great week.
thanks Matthew for reading and your comment. Much appreciated.
Thanks, Matthew, for reading and commenting on Doreen.
Thanks for liking 'Jelly Doughnuts", Matthew.
Best,
RR
Thanks for the comment on "Dis-Ease," Matthew. Maybe one day we'll get the chance to play a game of chess together!
Matthew, Thanks for ALL your kind words. I'm glad you liked my Norskie story.
Thanks, Matthew, for your comment on Routine. I'm glad to know that you keep your nosehairs trimmed. Those details matter!
Thanks, Matthew, I agree, who needs Playstation!
Hey Matthew, you've had an amazing life. Very cool on the Benedictine monk. Love the NC connection. Peace...
Thanks for inviting me to join North Carolina writers. I'm originally from Pennsylvania, spent my summers in Maryland, and currently live in Illinois. I have a good friend in Greensboro. In fact, I'll be visiting her in two weeks. North Carolina is a beautiful state!
Matthew, thank you for reading and commenting on This Girl in That Shirt. Hope this finds you well.
Thanks, Matthew, for your comments about The Great San Francisco Poetry Wars. I really appreciate it!
Thanks, Matthew, for your comment on "The Blocked Toxin." I appreciate your loyal reading of so much of my work!
Matthew! Thanks for reading and commenting on Celebrating Difference. No, they do not catch sea turtles any more. There are not enough around; we went to an island famous for its "turtle calling" and they never came. Frisbie's time was long ago...
Matthew, Your comments and those of the others really gave me a boost. Glad you liked "Secrets."
Thanks, Matthew, appreciate your comments :-)
Thanks, Matthew, for the welcome to Fictionaut, and for your kind words about "Writing in the Dark."
Thanks, Matthew, for your comments on "In the Pink Distance." I'm pleased you liked the poem.
Thanks for the comment on Latitude Adjustment, Matthew! And for making me hunger for NC BBQ too...
Matt, thanks for comment on 'Quince Orchard'. Adam & Eve didn't even occur to me as I started it, was just a combo of 2 experiences, but obviously the theme of the myth came and stayed in the mind as I wrote, guess the serpant is the other guy? or maybe that darn cat. Or one of the sisters at the Cloisters. And I did role reversal I guess, me being the thief and offering, then I am banished to a life of no guitar and books. Nice to know one can be clever when not trying.
Thanks, Matthew, I can see why you thought it was two stories. I've clarified the first part by adding "Lantana Prison" after "I visit on the inside" less ambiguous. Really appreciate your observations.
Thanks, Matthew, for your comments on "Why Go Outside?"
Hey thanks! You're nice. Carapace loves you.
My pleasure, Matthew.
Matthew,
Your idea, your execution, your piece. Editing is mostly taking out. Much easier than putting in in the first place! All the kudos go to you.
Thanks for inviting me to Fictionaut. Enjoying the communal spirit very much.
Congratulations on "Youth" being published! (I often revise my work even after it has been published. I guess writers just can't resist tinkering!)
Hi Matt. I've been teaching as a graduate instructor -- everyone in the program does so in his/her second year. Graduating later this month; I'll probably be an adjunct next year... Good luck with your MFA.
Hi Matthew - very insightful comments on Nine and Five, much appreciated. Thanks for the read. foster.
Matthew, Thanks for your comments. I'm flattered. I have several self-published books in print. They are available at Lulu. Check them out. Hello Walls is a collection. Tiny Bubbles is a group of more recent stories and has a great cover! Check it out; you'll like it.
Matthew,
Apologies that it's taken me two days to respond (I missed your comment), but thank you for the really nice words about Things I Should Have Done #2. How did it inspire you?
Take a look at our up coming themes for inspiration. We're really looking something outside the lines. So let your imagination spread beyond the obvious applications of the themes and surprise us. I'd love to send you an acceptance.
Thanks Matthew.
Thanks for joining The Glass Coin group. And Welcome. Were you thinking of submitting?
Thanks, Matthew, for commenting on Drug War Snitch - II.
Thanks for commenting on Drug War Snitch, Matthew. Your helpful suggestions are greatly appreciated.
Hi, Matthew, thank you so much for your kind comments on 'Nobody Told Marni' - much appreciated. M
I am part Cherokee, Matthew - my Father's side... My great-great-great grandmother was Cherokee, and a prisoner on the Trail of Tears, but escaped - or I wouldn't be typing this note.
Thanks for commenting on part II. Compared to your concise writing it must seem excessive.
Thank you so much, Matthew, for reading "Hammer Nail Nail," the fav, and your comments. I loved your comments, and you know what it means.
Thank you so much, Matthew, for commenting on "Classmates" and the fav!
Thanks for the comment on Love, Story, Matthew! Having a go on your wall now!
Matthew- Thanks so much for the kind words on “Letter to Neruda”, very much appreciated! :) -Sam
Matthew, I've never heard of Lee Childs, but thank you, thank you for your comments.
Thanks for checking on Nell Shea-II, Matthew. It's a lot to expecet anyone to read.
Thanks, Matthew, for reading and commenting on Nell Shea. Glad you liked it, and would buy the novel. More next.
Matthew, thank you for your nice words on Waiting For a Terrorist. I really appreciate it.
Matthew,
Thanks for the read. I was considering just stopping where I am in it, but I do so want to get to her apartment, have the detectives make their analysis, get to what happens to her and by who and why!
I had responded to your post, and hadn't realized I ought to be responding on your wall. Thanks again!
the hairdresser prompt was on the yAWP group room, and really it was a random prompt story from Stephan Anstay, not a formal prmopt. But is used it as such. I feel that any creative work that comes out of the yAWP room can be tagged as such here, and I have a loose definition to some degree. Everything is moving to the Group page... the contests, etc.
I like the last paragraph of Pleiku Jacket as well. I kind of held my breath while I was writing it. Thanks for your comment.
Thanks, Matthew, for your constructive criticism of At War. I'll work on producing another version with your suggestions in mind.
Thanks, Matthew for your generous comments. I'm glad you liked "Loony Tunes."
Hi Matthew, nice to hear from you. I'm about two hours away from Charlotte, in the mountains near Asheville (a town where a naked man ran for mayor not long ago and the city administration building looks like a wedding cake). I haven't made the journey to Charlotte yet, but I look forward to it, and I look forward to reading more of your work, which I'm quite enjoying, by the way.
Well Matthew....I printed off 'The Land of Four Rivers' but for the life of me cannot locate the other poem you had posted yesterday???? Also I cannot find the text of my e-mails to you???? Oh and belated Happy Birthday to you too and imagine you are speaking to a Joe Sullivan right now. Must be Irish. In gaelic his surname means " from one-eye" - "o suil abhain" --- tell him that. Must check out his stuff also.
No, not me, but my grandfather did with his brothers. I think he spoke Armenian, not Tagalog. My mom called it a language that was very guttural, with words that were sort of stuck in the throat. I've never heard it.
Thanks for the great comment, and happy birthday belatedly. You've got the same birthday as my dad. And my wife was born in Subic Bay. And my grandfather was Armenian. No joke.
Thanks Matt on 'Driven/Eyes' - spiders might top the list of pests. Miami we had palmettos, one flew up my t shirt once - harmless but unsettling. NY roaches do it by massive numbers and agility & quickness to flee.
Thanks for reading "Getting Religion." I suppose I could try writing my novel 140 characters at a time . . . but I think I'd lose the continuity (or the continuity I hope for).
Matthew, fabulous that you brought Donal O'Flynn onto F'Naut
Hi, Matthew, thank you for your kind words on my story. Martha
Hi Matthew, thanks for reading Common Trade. (& yes, to America.)
Thanks Matt for stopping by and reading Veronica Yvette. Of course there were other bad girl sirens around going back forever, but she was mine.
Matthew, thanks for your comments about "Snowed In." Indeed, Hemingway (and the Lish edited Carver) were on my mind when I wrote this. I would say I was "under the influence" of both, but I don't like the sound of that.
Matthew-
Hi! Just wanted to thank you for joining the Cervena Barva Press group. I appreciate it so much!
Gloria
Thanks, Matthew. Glad you liked "South of the Border."
Hi Matthew, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on Eight States Away - I really appreciate that. foster.
Matthew, email me your address in Phillipines and I'll send you some Sno*Caps(for real)
An old Kentucky boy. I did not know that, Matthew. How did I miss such an important fact in your bio? Damn me. Just damn me. Kentucky...hard as a coffin nail and everything born it. You know what I'm saying. We have no other choice.
Got it -- and thanks.
Very best,
RR
Thanks for reading and for the typo too!
Matthew, thank you for your kind words for "Eddie Says"!
Thanks for your comments on "Maps," Matthew!
Matthew, I added another excerpt of my novel. Let me know what you think.
Matt, thanks for reading Uptown/Bowery and the comment. As for metazen, I have a short story "Paper House" scheduled for its website on Apr. 8.
Matt, Thx for the nod on my Bhutan story - I have indeed been there and it was a spectacular journey to be sure..
Matthew, thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on Girl. I'm so glad it worked for you.
I'm with you on Goodbye, Columbus.
I look forward to reading your work.
Thank you for commenting on Cheat Sheets.
Welcome, Susan.
Matthew, you are living a more exciting life than I am. So nice of you to read Dark Country and leave your comment, thank you
Wow! Thanks. I enjoyed your piece about the Welsh wedding as well. If that's your voice on the recorded version, that rocks, too. You sound like one of my former college professors. I'm having my fiance come over later to listen to it.
I'll check out the April Fools challenge, too.
thanks again
welcome matthew! i liked 'mickey'...if you get the hand of the "challenges" and feel silly enough, you need to consider kevin myrick's april's fool challenge...and 'street traveler' is good stuff, btw. cheerio!