Hi Pia, I loved your story, “A Man,” in Spork 4.3. It’s great to find more of your writing on this site! I’m looking forward to reading your short story collection.
Hi Jamey - I’m never sure how to post on my own wall, if anyone will know about it, but thank you for having your students read the SF story. That makes me feel great. Just found out the story’s going to be included in Janet Burroway’s/Eliz. Stuckey-French’s bible’s next edition. My middle name is Zaninelli - Italian - and I married a German. Ciao!
Every time I try to leave a message for you it doesn’t seem to get posted. I’m trying again. You are a wonderful presence here and everywhere. Thank you for your many good works and deeds. Much appreciated.
Hi Pia: Just wanted to thank you for reading my stuff and for your thoughtful words. And thank you for putting your own wonderful writing up. I suspect I’m not the only one here who revisits your stories regularly! Lauren
Hey Pia! Thanks so much for taking the time to read my little stories and leave comments both kind and helpful. In answer to your question, yes, these little bits are part of something larger…or at least that’s the plan today. I enjoy reading your stories, too! Nice to “meet” you here.
I was so excited to read your story “Following The Notes” in the NEW SUDDEN FICTION collection. As always, it was a terrific read. The tension between the narrator and father, the father and mother, and the triangle of father, mother, and daughter was palpable. I felt such a pang at the end, at the daughter’s efforts to bring some light to the father’s misery/his sense of being “dumped.” It brought back so many memories. I had that sense of truth, that “yes, that’s just how it was” that’s as painful as it is illuminating. Thank you.
Yes, I only wish there were more schools like ours. It’s sad to see so many “regular” schools cutting back on the arts. Even at mine, the creative writing dept. is not as valued as the musical theatre or acting depts., mostly because creative depts. spend money and the performing make it. Money. *Sigh*
I also wanted to tell you that “Intermediate Goals” was one of my favorite stories I’ve read in quite awhile. I’m surprised more people don’t mention it their reviews of “Famous Fathers.” Or maybe I have atypical taste? The character voice is so strong. And the absurdity of walking around in a bear costume, getting hooked on both the anonymity and the attention of that. And then that heartbreaking moment where the narrator finally says something in her own words, but her ex doesn’t realize, because this moment of honesty is so unusual for her, almost like the boy who cried wolf …you give good ending.
Hey Pia, Thank you for your generous words about “Painted Faces.” I think I learned a lot about my own story reading your response. It was kind of a weird head trip to hear from you as I literally just finished reading “Famous Fathers and other Stories” this morning, and your voice and your characters are very much on my mind.
Pia - Very best luck with your novels. I wrote to one of the writers you mention, but I cannot find info for Peter Landon. You might urge him to get in touch with me, if you know how to reach him. With or without MacAdam Cage, you’ll be great. Victoria
Hi, Pia! I’m good. Busy writing et al. And You? Do you happen to be in NYC? I’m going up Wednesday with my friend Jen who’s going to read with Tao Lin, somewhere in Brooklyn.
Hail to thee, dear Pia! Thanks and praise for inviting me in. Seriously mon ami — this place is spacious and beautiful and exciting. Plus, I am loving those photos of you and your sisters. I wish I could zoom in. Or zoom back. I guess that’s what stories
Pia, thanks for all the great stories over the years, and a special thank you for the links to Hem. It’s like a soundtrack for the new year for me.
Pia:
You’re beautiful and I love you…I’ve barely met you but I’m positive that you’re the best kind of person…
Corey
Hi Pia, I loved your story, “A Man,” in Spork 4.3. It’s great to find more of your writing on this site! I’m looking forward to reading your short story collection.
Hi Jamey - I’m never sure how to post on my own wall, if anyone will know about it, but thank you for having your students read the SF story. That makes me feel great. Just found out the story’s going to be included in Janet Burroway’s/Eliz. Stuckey-French’s bible’s next edition. My middle name is Zaninelli - Italian - and I married a German. Ciao!
I read your story in New Sudden Fiction. My high school students love it, too. Love it. Love it. How’d you get such a unique name-your own, I mean.
Every time I try to leave a message for you it doesn’t seem to get posted. I’m trying again. You are a wonderful presence here and everywhere. Thank you for your many good works and deeds. Much appreciated.
Hi Pia: Just wanted to thank you for reading my stuff and for your thoughtful words. And thank you for putting your own wonderful writing up. I suspect I’m not the only one here who revisits your stories regularly! Lauren
Hey Pia! Thanks so much for taking the time to read my little stories and leave comments both kind and helpful. In answer to your question, yes, these little bits are part of something larger…or at least that’s the plan today. I enjoy reading your stories, too! Nice to “meet” you here.
I know! I will. I must…..
Thanks so much for the nice words, Pia. I love your work. Salutes to you!
B.
I was so excited to read your story “Following The Notes” in the NEW SUDDEN FICTION collection. As always, it was a terrific read. The tension between the narrator and father, the father and mother, and the triangle of father, mother, and daughter was palpable. I felt such a pang at the end, at the daughter’s efforts to bring some light to the father’s misery/his sense of being “dumped.” It brought back so many memories. I had that sense of truth, that “yes, that’s just how it was” that’s as painful as it is illuminating. Thank you.
Thank you, Pia, for your comments on Red! You made my day!
Your words about my story, Mars, made my day—a day otherwise bleak in just about every other aspect. So thank you.
Hi Pia,
Yes, I only wish there were more schools like ours. It’s sad to see so many “regular” schools cutting back on the arts. Even at mine, the creative writing dept. is not as valued as the musical theatre or acting depts., mostly because creative depts. spend money and the performing make it. Money. *Sigh*
M.
I also wanted to tell you that “Intermediate Goals” was one of my favorite stories I’ve read in quite awhile. I’m surprised more people don’t mention it their reviews of “Famous Fathers.” Or maybe I have atypical taste? The character voice is so strong. And the absurdity of walking around in a bear costume, getting hooked on both the anonymity and the attention of that. And then that heartbreaking moment where the narrator finally says something in her own words, but her ex doesn’t realize, because this moment of honesty is so unusual for her, almost like the boy who cried wolf …you give good ending.
Hey Pia, Thank you for your generous words about “Painted Faces.” I think I learned a lot about my own story reading your response. It was kind of a weird head trip to hear from you as I literally just finished reading “Famous Fathers and other Stories” this morning, and your voice and your characters are very much on my mind.
Hi Pia: Thanks for your kind words re: “Erase.” Just read “Ambulance” and was blown away. Add me to your long list of fans …
Pia - Very best luck with your novels. I wrote to one of the writers you mention, but I cannot find info for Peter Landon. You might urge him to get in touch with me, if you know how to reach him. With or without MacAdam Cage, you’ll be great. Victoria
Pia, thanks so much for your comments. Coming from you, they meant a lot. Happy New Year!
Pia:
Thanks for the kind words.
I hope someone writes a great love poem for you sometime soon.
Hi Pia,
Famous Fathers and Other Stories cracked me up. I like your use of “all” followed by an adjective. I confess to using it in one of my essays.
I’m a fellow Narrative-ite. And I too was born on May 6th. So was Bob Seger.
Great picture!
It looks like the pretty woman playing the flute is trying to hypnotize that baby.
Hi, Pia! I’m good. Busy writing et al. And You? Do you happen to be in NYC? I’m going up Wednesday with my friend Jen who’s going to read with Tao Lin, somewhere in Brooklyn.
Oh, man. I just got here, and already I’m being hazed.
Comment noted and corrected. Hi, Pia.
Hail to thee, dear Pia! Thanks and praise for inviting me in. Seriously mon ami — this place is spacious and beautiful and exciting. Plus, I am loving those photos of you and your sisters. I wish I could zoom in. Or zoom back. I guess that’s what stories