Lou Freshwater


Location New England
Website http://babysblackballoon.wordpress.com

About Me

I come from the South. I come from chaos. I've been in the film, bar, and restaurant business, and now I've come back to writing and I have gotten an English Degree which changed me in ways I could not have imagined. As for where I am going, I really have no idea. I just know I love literature.

I am interested in constructive criticism. I want to improve my craft, and I am here to learn.

Any favorite authors? Books?

Shakespeare, Steinbeck, Melville, Camus, Dostoyevsky, Chekhov, Poe, Welty, Borges, Sherwood Anderson, Bobbie Ann Mason, Langston Hughes, Tess Gallagher,Paul Laurence Dunbar, Ray Bradbury, Zora Neal Hurston, Flannery O'Connor, Lucille Clifton, Alice Munro, Grace Paley, Jhumpa Lahiri, Tennessee Williams, Arthur Miller, Samuel Beckett,and I'll just stop writing now. Okay, I have to add Dorothy Allison and Yiyun Li.

Lou Freshwater's Wall

Bill Yarrow – Aug 17, 2011

Thanks, Lou, so much for your comment on "The Grave of Rimbaud."

Fred Osuna – Aug 16, 2011

Thanks for reading and commenting on "Haze," Lou!

Jack Swenson – Aug 15, 2011

Lou, thank you so much for your kind words about my zoo story.

DJ Young – Aug 15, 2011

Hi Lou - thank you for the welcome. :-)

Marcus Speh – Aug 14, 2011

thank you, lou, for gracing "ginger" with that comment...love this story being compared to dali. very evocative.

Jules Archer – Jul 01, 2011

Your words on "Traitor" made me all warm and fuzzy. Thank you!

Marcus Speh – Jun 29, 2011

thank you, lou, way beyond the realm of perfection, the flip side of glorious imperfection, this piece was mostly a lot of fun to conceive with my daughter & write. thank you for your comment!

Berit Ellingsen – Jun 22, 2011

Thank you so much for the comment to A June Defection. :) I'm glad to hear you liked it.

Jane Hammons – Jun 22, 2011

Thanks for the read and fave on "Mothering in Real Time," Lou. I appreciate the extensive, thoughtful comments. Balance, yes, always a balancing act!

Marcus Speh – Jun 11, 2011

thank you lou for commenting on "in the nude", i appreciate it very much.

Berit Ellingsen – Jun 11, 2011

Thank you very much for the comment about Repatriation. I appreciate it a lot.

Berit Ellingsen – May 12, 2011

Nice finding you here as well as on Twitter. I'm curious about your stories here and will read. :)

Meg Tuite – May 03, 2011

Lou, Thank you so much for reading "Sinister Age of the Draft"and commenting!! Much appreciated!!!

Shelagh Power-Chopra – May 03, 2011

Lou! Thank you! Did you ever snag those paperbacks?!

Marcelle Heath – May 02, 2011

Hi Lou - Thank you so much for your generous comments on "The Last Swim" :)!!

James Lloyd Davis – May 02, 2011

Lou, thank you for the fave and the comment on "The Rising."

Kathy Fish – May 01, 2011

Hi Lou. Thanks for reading and commenting and faving "The Bed". I'm so glad you liked it.

Julie Innis – Apr 24, 2011

Tears? Score! No, but really, thank you. East Coast meet-up asap.

M – Apr 23, 2011

Lou, wow. Your comment took my breath away and made my weekend.

Jane Hammons – Apr 23, 2011

Hey Lou--Thanks for catching Dreaming in Mink as it floated to the surface for a moment. Always appreciate your reads.

Susan Tepper – Apr 23, 2011

Lou,"we are on a very bad trajectory." God, yes, I agree. The media has a short memory-span. the Gulf is off the radar, Japan, and what about NEW ORLEANS!!! Part of an entire city wiped out maybe forever! It can make you shudder and want to pull the blankets over your head.
Thanks for reading my oil story. Hope you are doing well.

Foster Trecost – Apr 18, 2011

Hey Lou. Thanks for reading Books and Covers, and thanks for the comment, too - means a lot! fos.

Shelagh Power-Chopra – Apr 18, 2011

Thank you, Lou, for your nice words about care & danger!

Robert Vaughan – Apr 17, 2011

Lou, thanks for your generous read and comments on "Loneliness." I appreciate it!

Jerry Ratch – Apr 14, 2011

Very much appreciate the fave, Lou!

Bill Yarrow – Apr 13, 2011

Thanks for faving "The Truth Will Out"! It hardly deserves it, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, Lou.

Christian Bell – Apr 11, 2011

Lou, thank you for reading and commenting on "San Pedro de Macoris"!

M – Apr 10, 2011

Hi Lou. Thank you for your very kind remarks on the woodpile. I very much appreciate them!

Rebecca Coffey – Apr 10, 2011

Lou, thanks for the comment about "Dorothy's Parker House Rolls." Yes, she was a sad character--and so brilliantly funny and bitter.

Bill Yarrow – Apr 10, 2011

Thank, Lou, for your comments on and fave of "Son of Goya." I appreciate them very much.

Brendan McKennedy – Apr 05, 2011

Lou Freshwater you've got a great name. Thank you for the really nice comments & fave on "Where You Lay Your Dreams"!

J. Mykell Collinz – Apr 04, 2011

Hi, Lou. Thanks for reading 'Made in Japan.' I appreciate your efforts in support of the New Sun Rising group.

Marcelle Heath – Apr 02, 2011

Hi Lou - Thank you for your nice words on "Christina Heppel" :)!

Jack Swenson – Mar 28, 2011

Lou, I'll never tell. Thanks for the comment, though. Glad my story caught your eye.

James Lloyd Davis – Mar 28, 2011

Lou, thank you for the fave, comment and validation on my story, "She said." Good to see you back here.

Jules Archer – Mar 28, 2011

Lou - thank you so very much for your kind comments on Hog Heaven. So glad you liked.

Kim Hutchinson – Mar 27, 2011

Thanks for the read and comment on Humpty Dumpty 2011, Lou! I appreciate it.

Foster Trecost – Mar 27, 2011

Hi Lou, thanks for reading man on the run. I really appreciated your comments. fos.

Susan Tepper – Mar 27, 2011

Lou I will always picture you, too, now that we met and got to talk, and thanks so much for your sweet words on Shoes!

Frankie Sachs – Mar 26, 2011

Step away from the submissions pile. (I know exactly what you mean. Mine are shot.)

-F.

Frankie Sachs – Mar 25, 2011

Hey Lou, thanks for reading my stuff. Heart Jar is crazy dark. I love it.

-F.

Bill Yarrow – Mar 24, 2011

Thank you, Lou, for your comment on and fave of the Translator poem. I always enjoy hearing from you.

Roberto C. Garcia – Feb 08, 2011

Lou, (oh that's such a cool name)thanks for the comments on "Muse". I'm glad you enjoyed it.

David Ackley – Feb 06, 2011

Lou, thanks so much again, this time for your first and most pleasing comment on "pieces of Flight." Great to have you reading my stuff.

Robert Vaughan – Feb 04, 2011

Very kind of you to comment on 10,000 Dollar Pyramid. Thanks a lot!

Matthew A. Hamilton – Feb 04, 2011

Thank you for the nice compliment about Mama's Funeral. I'm happy you enjoyed the story.

David Ackley – Feb 03, 2011

Thanks, Lou, for reading and the comment on "Express." Very pleased you liked it.

Bill Yarrow – Feb 03, 2011

Thanks, Lou, for commenting on "Wahrheit und Dichtung." I'm glad you stopped by!

Christian Bell – Feb 01, 2011

Lou, thanks for your comment on Echoless!

Jules Archer – Jan 30, 2011

Ugh. *Grateful Don't judge me.

Jules Archer – Jan 30, 2011

Hi Lou - thank you for loving "Solar Plexus's" words. I am greatful you read it and liked.

Marcelle Heath – Jan 30, 2011

Hi Lou - I DID! I'm sorry! I think it's b/c I love both of your names - Lou & Jules. Great, great writers names.
Thanks again for reading my story :)

Marcelle Heath – Jan 30, 2011

Hi Jules! Thank you for your generous comments on my story "Nothing Good..." I'm truly grateful!

Susan Tepper – Jan 29, 2011

Lou thanks so much for reading "the world will end.." and liking it, and i'm plugging away on the novel.

Marcela Fuentes – Jan 28, 2011

Thank you for your comments on my story!

Jack Swenson – Jan 28, 2011

Lou, thanks for the read and the comment about "Carver Country." I appreciate it.

Cherise Wolas – Nov 17, 2010

Lou, thank you so much for your great comments and the fav on Unpacking Sentences. I love that you were going to send to forward it. Great to have that kind of effect.

Michelle Elvy – Nov 15, 2010

Lou! Thanks so much for the comment on Two Trees. Lovely to hear from you.

Kathy Fish – Nov 14, 2010

Thank you, Lou. I appreciate the close read and insightful comments for "Moro".

Kim Hutchinson – Nov 14, 2010

Thanks for the kind words on Rats! Glad you liked the story.

M – Oct 13, 2010

I come from the South too, Lou. For that reason alone, I'm following you, that and the fact that you have one of the best author fave lists I've seen so far and that you are almost more than a century old and look like you're 16. (Beauty secrets, out with them, please.) Looking forward to the stories... -- Q

Kim Hutchinson – Oct 06, 2010

Thanks for the very kind words on If Wishes Were Horses, Lou! I'm so glad you liked it!

Mark Kerstetter – Oct 05, 2010

Thanks for your encouragement Lou; I've been questioning my decision to post anything longer than 1,500 words.

Jack Swenson – Oct 03, 2010

Thanks, Jules for your comment on my post 9/11 story. I remember how off-balance I felt, so if it came across in the story, that's good.

James Lloyd Davis – Oct 01, 2010

Thank you, Lou, for your fave and the comments on "The domino theory." It's a story that needs to be told.

Mark Reep – Oct 01, 2010

Hi Lou,
Thanks for your comments on Kilz. Just read This Girl- Good stuff.
You made me care about both those characters, and I didn't want the piece to end. All best.

Matthew A. Hamilton – Sep 29, 2010

Thank you for reading Water Heart. Glad you liked it.

stephen hastings-king – Sep 29, 2010

hello lou...thanks for your comment on "event particle." nice to (sort of) meet you.

Jerry Ratch – Sep 29, 2010

Thank you, Lou!

J. Mykell Collinz – Sep 29, 2010

Hi, Lou. Thanks for reading 'Blues Away.' I appreciate your comment.

Bill Yarrow – Sep 29, 2010

Thanks, Lou, for commenting on "Son of Uncle Sam." Glad you liked the poem!

Marcus Speh – Sep 29, 2010

thank you, lou - what a wonderful comment on "At the ministry"! i added yr baby black blog to my blogroll at http://marcusspeh.com - good blog!

Kari Nguyen – Sep 27, 2010

Hi Lou, thank you so much for taking the time to read Star Anise. Your comments mean a lot. I appreciate it!

Matthew A. Hamilton – Sep 27, 2010

Thank you for reading Rivals. Glad you liked it.

Larry Strattner – Sep 26, 2010

Thanks for Snake Eyes, Lou. My personal motto is, always pick a smiling god.

Julie Innis – Sep 26, 2010

Lou, thanks! Really love your work here. Hope you're writing 'hot' as they say and that there's more to come.

Cherise Wolas – Sep 26, 2010

Lou, thank you greatly for your terrific and generous comments on Sisters At The Lake, and for the fave. Your read is much appreciated!

Susan Tepper – Sep 26, 2010

Lou,thanks for reading and liking my vagina girl story (Centerpiece)! cheers!

Marcelle Heath – Sep 26, 2010

Hi Lou! Thanks so much for your comments on "Origin":)!

J. Mykell Collinz – Sep 25, 2010

Hi, Lou. Thanks for reading 'Three Times Fifty Five.' I'm happy to know you enjoyed it. I've always enjoyed your writing.

Jack Swenson – Sep 24, 2010

Lou, I am so glad you liked my latest post. That James has a way with words, doesn't he?

Sly V. Rourke – Sep 24, 2010

Hi Lou, thanks so much for commenting on my abusive father story. Yiyun Li is amazing.

Randal Houle – Sep 11, 2010

Lou, Thank you for reading "Thursday," I really appreciate it. Keep it up! ~R

Kate Brown – Sep 10, 2010

Thanks for reading 'Swimming Pool', Lou. Very happy you liked it so much.

Matthew A. Hamilton – Sep 07, 2010

Thank you for reading The Lottery. Much appreciated. And Happy Birthday.

Bill Yarrow – Sep 07, 2010

Thanks for your comment, Lou. Glad you enjoyed "Bone Density."

Kim Hutchinson – Sep 06, 2010

Nice to meet you, Lou. Thanks for the lovely comment on Responsible. I appreciate the read, and I'll be back to check out your stories soon!

Mark Kerstetter – Sep 05, 2010

Hi Lou. I'm finally becoming acquainted with this place and your corner seemed like the best place to start.

Martin Dodd – Sep 05, 2010

NC? I have a cousin in Winston-Salem. I have semi-plans to visit "soon." If you head this way, drop a note.

Bill Yarrow – Sep 05, 2010

Hi, Lou. Thanks for reading and commenting on "Parabola Tango." Always love hearing from you.

James Lloyd Davis – Sep 05, 2010

Lou, while I was out, you came by and read "The man who killed Molly Bloom." I so appreciate the fave and the comments you left. Thank you.

Jane Hammons – Sep 05, 2010

Thanks, late Lou!

Martin Dodd – Sep 04, 2010

Lou, thanks for the comment on Birdie. From what part of the south? I was born & raised in Atlanta, but have been in CA for almost fifty years.

Linda Simoni-Wastila – Sep 04, 2010

Ha, we were reading each other at the exact same time. So wonderful to see your work again! Peace...

Susan Tepper – Sep 04, 2010

Lou, so glad you enjoyed "burned" and thanks so much for letting me know
cheers!

George LaCas – Aug 22, 2010

Hi Lou, thank you for your "Godot is a Heartbreaking Figment" comment.

Michelle Elvy – Aug 07, 2010

Lou! Thanks for the lovely comment on A Night of Not Knowing. So good to see you here.

Jane Hammons – Aug 05, 2010

Thanks, Lou, for reading and faving "The Devil's Inkwell."

Kari Nguyen – Aug 03, 2010

Hi Lou, thank you so much for your insightful comments about Requirement. It means a lot.

Kait Mauro – Aug 01, 2010

I put 'This Girl in That Shirt' up on Like Birds Lit. Thanks so much for submitting it to the group! :)

James Lloyd Davis – Aug 01, 2010

Good to see you back, although "see" is only metaphoric. I hope you'll be posting again. Either way, bienvenidos!

Linda Simoni-Wastila – May 20, 2010

Thanks Lou for reading and commenting on Survivor. A repeat for you, I believe. And how the heck are you? I'm crazy nutso with the end of the year...

Linda Simoni-Wastila – May 20, 2010

Thanks Lou for reading and commenting on Survivor. A repeat for you, I believe. And how the heck are you? I'm crazy nutso with the end of the year...

Michelle Elvy – May 20, 2010

Aw, thanks, Lou, for your comment on A Knobby Thing. Want to see more of you, too! :)

Michael J. Solender – May 20, 2010

Thanx Lou for enjoying my Moon Dance and your comment.

Jane Hammons – May 19, 2010

Thanks for reading "Giving Notice"--where Bittie Betina got her start :)

Bill Yarrow – May 19, 2010

Thanks, Lou, for reading and commenting on my poem "Pain." I'm glad you liked it!

Matthew A. Hamilton – May 16, 2010

Thank you for reading and commenting on Caning. Much appreciated.

Stephanie Bobo – May 13, 2010

Thanks, Lou, for the read and the fave on "My Thumbs." Still keeping an eye on yours?

James Lloyd Davis – May 12, 2010

Thank you for the comment on "Things you remember..." You made my day ... again.

J. Mykell Collinz – May 12, 2010

Thanks, Lou, for reading and commenting on At Seventeen.

Myra King – May 11, 2010

Thank you Lou for such nice comments. My daughter loves this one as well :-)

Marc Nash – May 11, 2010

Thanks for the comment Lou. How are you doing?

Joe Sullivan – May 11, 2010

Glad to hear back from you, Lou. The spam folder's played tricks on me before — it's frustrating. Great to connect with on here, and thanks for the blog comment, too.

Bill Yarrow – May 11, 2010

Thanks for your kind comment on "Raleigh B"!

James Lloyd Davis – May 11, 2010

Thank you, Lou, for your comment on "... bones."

Michael J. Solender – May 11, 2010

Lou, thanks for the nice words on my chicken story!

Matt Dennison – May 09, 2010

Thanks for the faving of "Parable." The list of "ingredients" was basically what was directly in front of me, having recently moved.

Myra King – May 08, 2010

Thanks Lou, I'm pleased you liked my poem :-)

Stephen Carter – May 07, 2010

Hi Lou,

Thanks for reading the naked man of barcelona and for the kind words. Its taken me so long to reply that you may not even remember. But i appreciate it.

I see you're a southerner. Me too. Where are you from?

Walter Bjorkman – May 05, 2010

Lou - thank's for the read and comments on 'Elsie's World', that one is special to me, I still think of her now & then.

And, you could always forgo the prosciutto, the veggies & bread alone were to die for.

Bill Yarrow – May 05, 2010

Thanks, Lou, for your kind comments on "Axes."

Gary Percesepe – May 04, 2010

hey lou--

thanks so much for yur interest in and comments on my derrida piece--much appreciated.

cheers,

g

JM Prescott – May 04, 2010

Thanks for the comment. Your path to now sounds really interesting.

Joe Sullivan – May 04, 2010

I really dug your article on the art of haiku. I've been tinkering around with them for the past five years, and I learned a lot from reading your essay. Kerouac goes through creation of a haiku in his Paris Review interview — you can download the PDF from their site. Maybe you already have. I got really into the form after reading Jack's Book of Haikus, and realizing it's not all about the syllables or form, so much as it is spirit.

J. Mykell Collinz – May 03, 2010

Lou, thanks for reading and commenting on DWS-IV. It helps to know that you can sense the paranoia and feel the tension in the story.

Matthew A. Hamilton – May 03, 2010

Thank you for reading and commenting on The Secrets of the Dead.

Michelle Elvy – May 03, 2010

Lou - thanks for your generous comment on Latitude Adjustment. We should drink a mint julep or two together sometime...

Myra King – May 02, 2010

Lou, it was not a slog - some of the best American writers such as Carver, Shaw, Cheever write much longer stories than 6,000 words. As an Australian writer I was worried my stories would not be long enough, and although I know Walter has said it in jest, I'm surprised about the shorter stories. I guess it's a matter of time, or lack of, on the the part of the reader/s. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Jerry Ratch – May 02, 2010

Thank you, Lou, for your comments on A Caregiver's Homage for the Very Old. Much appreciated!

Myra King – May 02, 2010

Thanks, Lou for your kind comments on Mind Games. It was a new genre for me and I found it fun to write. Looks like I'm out of the o favs group! Thanks again.

J.B. Lacombe – May 02, 2010

Lou, thank you again for reading and commenting on my first story on F'naut.

Meg Pokrass – May 02, 2010

thank you for your comment on Ave. of the Giants. Appreciated!

Jack Swenson – May 02, 2010

Lou, thanks for your response to "Now or Never." Ignore the clock. Ask yourself, "Now, what am I going to do to have fun today?!"

Cherise Wolas – May 02, 2010

Lou,
Thank you for reading Things I Should Have Done #3. The succinctness of your comment was thrilling. Was intrigued by your About Me on your wall. I look forward to reading your work.

Walter Bjorkman – May 01, 2010

Your story "Man Loses Life" 's entry im Poetipedia (the book) is now posted. The editors are insured against lawsuits and bodily harm.

Bill Yarrow – May 01, 2010

Thanks a lot for your kind comments, Lou! Yes, I think writers especially are prone to "mad hope."

Stephanie Bobo – May 01, 2010

Thanks, Lou, for reading "Hammer Nail Nail" and your insightful comments!

Michelle Elvy – Apr 29, 2010

Lou! Thank you so much for pointing me to Unction -- I finally got there this morning, and my heart aches. So gorgeous. Meanwhile, I have been faving all over the place, including your Frankenstein tale. So well written, so rich and haunting and affecting. Thank you.

Marcelle Heath – Apr 28, 2010

Hi Lou - Thanks for your nice comments on "Flotation Device"!

Walter Bjorkman – Apr 26, 2010

Thanks for the read(s) of Desert/Manhattan, your input is always greatly appreciated

Bonnie ZoBell – Apr 26, 2010

Thanks so much for your comments on "Real Estate." You've made my day!

Matt Dennison – Apr 25, 2010

Thanks for reading another of my LONG stories, Lou (must admit I did hope you would!)

Michael J. Solender – Apr 25, 2010

yo when are you gonna write for the NOT???

Sara – Apr 25, 2010

Lou, thanks for your note on Common Trade. I really appreciate it.

Walter Bjorkman – Apr 25, 2010

Thanks for 'The Strange Tantes' look see. They were supposed to be my aunts, and sisters, or that's what us kiddies thought. Then that day, I found out neither was true and it sunk in. Guess its a nod to the hood that they weren't ostracized in that restrictive era, but sort of adopted and accepted as quirky outsiders let in.

Michelle Elvy – Apr 25, 2010

Thank you Lou for your warm comments on Almost There. I'm hoping I can sustain that kind of balance between story/beauty/pain. Thank you so much.

Jack Swenson – Apr 24, 2010

The perfect teeth people! What a hoot! And thanks for the comment.

Jack Swenson – Apr 24, 2010

Lou, thank you so much. I just found your nice comment on my story "The Birds."

Jack Swenson – Apr 24, 2010

Yes, but I'm 25 years younger than you!

Samuel Peralta – Apr 24, 2010

Lou- Thanks so much for the kind words on "Letter to Neruda", so appreciated! :) -Sam

Martha Williams – Apr 23, 2010

Lou, thank you very much for your lovely comment on 'Tears of a Trucker' - you've made my day, Martha.

Marcelle Heath – Apr 22, 2010

Thanks Lou, for your nice comments on "Get Some Strange" :)

Walter Bjorkman – Apr 20, 2010

Thanks for the reading of Poetipedia. BTW - B is selling unpublished really bad dementia poetry to other writers @ $20. a word (have you priced the cost of a good padded room lately?) - don't accept imitations, his is the worst.

Colette Sartor – Apr 20, 2010

Thanks for your kind words on "Bandit." I'm looking forward to reading your work.

Martha Williams – Apr 20, 2010

Hi, Lou - thank you for your kind words on 'Our Stop'. I just read 'My Name is Bill Franklin' and thought it was wonderful. Martha

Michelle Elvy – Apr 18, 2010

Hey Lou -- thanks for your comment on Love, Story. I'm glad you like the line about fiction near the end. I have just perused your website, lots to take in there. Thanks for connecting here. Will read more of yours soon!

Aaron Teel – Apr 18, 2010

Thanks- I really appreciate the comment.

Sara – Apr 18, 2010

Lou, Thank you so much for your thoughtful read of Girl. I really appreciate your taking the time to comment in the way that you did, and I'm so glad the piece worked for you.

Welcome, here. I look forward to getting to know you through your work.

Beverly Akerman – Apr 17, 2010

Thanks for reading and commenting on "Pie."

Jane Hammons – Apr 17, 2010

Thanks for reading Bittie Betina. She's very close to my heart.

Linda Simoni-Wastila – Apr 16, 2010

Welcome Lou! I see you've already gotten comfy here. And bravo for posting a story. Off to take a gander. Peace!

Walter Bjorkman – Apr 16, 2010

Lou,
Thanks for the read of 'Gary', and the comments. I look forward to reading yours.

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