Three as She Lay Sleeping
by Gary Justis
As I watched her sleep, I saw gentle frost and sun on crystal.
Her hair, impish glances and fragrance above shaded woods.
Her warm flesh, in dark hollows, under tree falls; her touch,
like a spider's clinging, silken thread…
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Sleeping Beauty in our room...
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is lovely--
Wonderful imagery, Gary. I like this piece.
I don't generally comment on poetry (as I don't feel myself a qualified commentator), but this is good work. You say much in few words. Very delicate, very evocative.
A lovely love poem, Gary.
Thanks to all of you folks...you're very kind to come by. I look forward to visiting your work!
I really love the feel to this poem - silken.
Def fave
Concise and moving poem, sensory and palpable. Lovely work, Gary.
thank you Myra.
thanks Robert, I apreciate your reading the work.