My father was a writer
and a great man, and
his father was a writer,
as was the one before him,
and he was a great writer,
too.
So that I got confused
sometimes
if greatness came
from being a man,
or a father,
or a writer,
or all of them at once,
since the attribute
"great"
seemed strewn so carelessly
among my forefathers.
As for myself,
I am a man most of all,
then a father
and a writer last,
but great I am not
in any of these,
be it character
destiny
or occupation.
I can spell very well
and I can raise a storm
from a single drop of
holy water.
And I sprinkle my verse
with fairy dust
to make it fly.
My greatness is fidelity
to all things I observe
from the lowliest love
to the highest hatred.
My smallest word is
"I"
which I use as an eye
to look around
from under my hood.
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Published by Metazen, October 2009.
I don't usually write poems. I did once, years ago, in London, many poems, and I carried them off to a poetry group moderated by a Great Poet, where they were slaughtered, line by line, and hung up for public shaming. It hurt! Then, I vowed: no more line breaks! This one didn't really need them either. It whispers: "I'm not really a poem". For me, a poem can be a good beginning for a longer prose piece, only less dense and less mysterious.
I like this.
Poetry workshops suck. I went through two years of them. Poets like the moderator you met should be barred from ever commenting. They suck the joy out of words.